英語四級的作文點評

　　英語四級作文點評

　　My First Chemistry Teacher

　　I will never forget my first chemistry teacher. He was a little man with thick glasses, but he had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. And his lessons were not easily forgotten.

　　I still remember one of my lessons from this teacher. After the students were all in the lab, the teacher brought out three bott[es. One was filled with petrol, one with castor oil and one with vinegar. "Now watch carefully," said the teacher.

　　He then filled a cup with some of the petrol, some of the castor oil and some of the vinegar. As the students watched him quiet[y, he mixed the three together. After that, he held up one of his fingers and showed it to the class. He then dipped it into the cup. After a few seconds he took his finger out. "Now watch," he said. "Remember, you must do every thing as I do."

　　He put a finger in his mouth, tasted it and smiled, looking rather pleased. Then he handed the cup around the class of students. Each student dipped a finger into the mixture and sucked it. Instead of smiling, each of them made a face. The mixture tasted terrible.

　　When the cup was at last returned to the teacher, he said sadly, "I＇ m sorry, none of you watched carefully enough. Yes, I sucked a finger, but the finger I put into my muth was not the one I had dipped into the cup."

　　It was my first important lesson as a student of chemistry and I never forgot it.

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　　這個故事，也許很多人都看過。作者生動地記敘了他的第一位化學(xué)老師是如何給他上了一堂難忘的化學(xué)課，使他一生受益匪淺，讀者可模仿寫一篇使自己難以忘懷的人和事的文章。

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　　我的第一位化學(xué)老師

　　我永遠(yuǎn)也不會忘記我第一位化學(xué)老師。他戴著一副深度眼境，個頭不高。他有著奇妙的教學(xué)方法，能使他的`課上得生動有趣。因此，他的課是不容易忘記的。

　　我現(xiàn)在還仍然記得他給我們上的一節(jié)課。在學(xué)生全都進入化學(xué)實驗室后，老師拿出三個瓶子。一個瓶子裝滿汽油，一個裝滿篦麻油，還有一個裝著醋。老師說：“現(xiàn)在請仔細(xì)觀察�！�

　　于是他拿山一個杯子，裝上一點汽油，一點篦麻油和一點醋。當(dāng)學(xué)生們靜靜地瞅著他時，他把這二種液體攪和在一起。隨后他舉起一個手指給學(xué)生看，接著把手指伸到杯子里蘸了蘸。幾秒鐘后他把手指拿出來，說：“現(xiàn)在大家瞧著。記住，你們都要照我這樣做�！�

　　他把一個手指放進嘴里，嘗了嘗，微笑著，顯出一副得得意的樣子。然后把杯子遞給學(xué)生，在全班傳了一圈，每個學(xué)生都把一個手指伸入混合液中蘸了蘸，然后放進嘴里，吸吮了一下。他們沒有笑容，而是每個人都做了個苦臉。這混合液太難吃了。

　　當(dāng)這個杯子最后傳回老師手中時，他不高興地說：“很遺憾，你們沒有一個人仔細(xì)觀察我的動作。不錯，我是吸吮了一個手指，但是放進嘴里的那個手指并不是我伸進杯子里的那個�！�

　　這就是我的一節(jié)重要的化學(xué)課，而我一直沒有忘記這堂課。

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