My birthday為題目的作文

　　My birthdayYesterday was my birthday. I invited my good friends to my home. they buyed me many nice presents.Before the party. I open all the presents one by one.They give me some surprise.They are all liked by me. Of them, I like the book best. Because it is written in English,I can pratice my English.After seeing the presents ,We have an interesting party, We danced and played some games .I feel we all enjoy ourselves and this is the best party that I hold.

　　1.“they buyed me many nice presents.Before the party. I open …”此句中句首字母要大寫(xiě)，“buyed”應(yīng)改為“bought”，“open”應(yīng)改為“opened”.注意時(shí)態(tài)及詞形變化規(guī)則。

　　2.“They give me some surprise.”因敘述過(guò)去的事，應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故“give”應(yīng)改為“gave”。

　　3.單詞“pratice”應(yīng)改為“practice” 。

　　4.“We have an interesting party, We danced and played some games .I feel we all enjoy ourselves and this is the best party that I hold.”應(yīng)該使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以“have”應(yīng)改為“had”,“feel”應(yīng)改為“felt”,“enjoy ”應(yīng)改為“enjoyed”“is ”應(yīng)改為“was”,“that I hold”定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)態(tài)為過(guò)去完成時(shí)較好，故”“old”應(yīng)改為“had held”。

　　本文語(yǔ)句連貫，句意通順。內(nèi)容具體。但存在單詞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

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