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2018專四寫作范文《預(yù)防校園火災(zāi)》
火災(zāi)是現(xiàn)代危害人們生命與財(cái)產(chǎn)安全的主要災(zāi)害,現(xiàn)在尤其是校園火災(zāi)更為引人關(guān)注。下面,小編為大家送上一篇相關(guān)的2018專四寫作范文。
Fire Prevention on Campus
People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents,heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down,students lost their lives,and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact,people keep asking,“What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”
A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes.For example,three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters.As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power.In other cases,fires were also caused by stoves,candles,cigarette butts,etc.
Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken,students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control.The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First,learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second,double-check candles,heaters,stoves and other electric appliances,and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms.Lastly,do not smoke in the dorm.
附:專四寫作技巧
1、注重寫好文章的框架
我曾經(jīng)問過我的外教老師,外國(guó)人看文章最注重的是什么,他告訴我說是文章的framework.即一篇文章好不好,首先看的不是他的句型,詞匯,或是論點(diǎn)等。而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚,我們不能老是采用大三段的形式-開頭,經(jīng)過,結(jié)尾。我們可以多用用連接詞,例如:first of all, moreover, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段,給考官一目了然的感覺。還有我們可以多看看國(guó)外的文章,看看他們的寫作模式,我當(dāng)初寫文章的時(shí)候,用的就是我看到一篇國(guó)外文章的模式,我覺得可以套用,我最后介紹給大家。
2、句型的多樣化
如果一篇文章,從頭到尾,永遠(yuǎn)用的只有一種句型,那么這篇文章一定拿不到高分,我們可以適當(dāng)?shù)母膿Q一下句型,我給大家一定建議,希望給大家有點(diǎn)幫助。
3、基本句型包括
、.主謂句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句子;Ⅳ.被動(dòng)語態(tài)(我看到一張?zhí)终f,不要用被動(dòng),我不這樣認(rèn)為,國(guó)外的文章,用被動(dòng)的也比比皆是。
4、復(fù)雜句型
包括Ⅰ.并列句;Ⅱ.從句(定語,狀語,名詞性,非謂語)
5.詞匯的Variety
說實(shí)話做到這點(diǎn)真的很難,首先你要有龐大的詞匯量,第二你要用的恰當(dāng),不出錯(cuò)誤。我自認(rèn)做不到這點(diǎn),所以我用的詞匯有時(shí)候會(huì)重復(fù)。當(dāng)然大家可以累計(jì)一些固定搭配的詞匯,例如:激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)fierce competition等
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