2015年6月英語六級(jí)作文解析及滿分作文
2015年6月的大學(xué)英語四級(jí)、六級(jí)考試已全部結(jié)束，下面第一時(shí)間對(duì)六級(jí)作文進(jìn)行了詳解，逐一進(jìn)行寫作思路及參考范文，供廣大考生參考。
考前預(yù)測(cè)命中出題方向
不出意外，15年6月六級(jí)寫作再次連續(xù)考察名言警句型作文，三道考題分別涉及：知識(shí)與實(shí)踐、做小事和好奇心。第一篇適用于第二道真題“做小事”。其中一篇“教育”適用于第一道真題“知識(shí)與實(shí)踐”，第六篇“人生哲理”適用于第三道真題“好奇心”。考生如果之前背過，應(yīng)感覺并不難寫。
下面對(duì)三道題目逐一加以解析。
2015年6月英語六級(jí)考試作文真題第一篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
命題分析
本題要求評(píng)論英國教士Thomas Fuller的一句名言：“知識(shí)是一種財(cái)富，但實(shí)踐是打開財(cái)富的鑰匙。”并要求可以給出一個(gè)或兩個(gè)例子來闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。顯而易見，本題考查理論知識(shí)與實(shí)踐技能之間的關(guān)系，這是雅思[微博]寫作反復(fù)考察過的話題。
寫作思路解析
1、本題首段應(yīng)該通過理論知識(shí)與實(shí)踐技能之間的關(guān)系引出主題;
2、第二段可以進(jìn)行舉例論證，列舉自己參加兼職打工、志愿者活動(dòng)等親身經(jīng)驗(yàn)證明實(shí)踐技能的重要性;
3、尾段可以進(jìn)行歸納結(jié)論或提出建議措施：一方面我們應(yīng)該努力積累理論知識(shí)，另一方面我們應(yīng)該積極培養(yǎng)自己的實(shí)踐技能。
參考范文：
Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding “No!” Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value。
For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn’t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless。
To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。”
參考譯文
一個(gè)大夫只學(xué)過課本上的手術(shù)知識(shí)，叫他給你主刀你是否愿意?顯然，這個(gè)問題的答案是一聲響亮的“不”。書本知識(shí)要有實(shí)際價(jià)值，就必須同實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)相結(jié)合。
對(duì)我來說，實(shí)踐某件事，或者說親自去嘗試某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)并感受最后的結(jié)果，要比讀書聽課給我留下的印象更深刻，更持久。如果只是讀到如何寫作，或是聽別人講解寫作方法，我覺得自己還是不會(huì)寫，非得親自寫一篇才行。當(dāng)然，實(shí)際寫作中也會(huì)用到以前學(xué)過的寫作方法。掌握其他技能也是一個(gè)道理。以體育為例，一個(gè)人可以通曉所有的比賽規(guī)則和相關(guān)戰(zhàn)術(shù)技巧，但除非這個(gè)人上場(chǎng)打球，否則那堆理論就是呆板無用的。
總之，對(duì)于理論知識(shí)和實(shí)踐技能，相比之下，實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)當(dāng)然更重要。正如英國教士托馬斯 富勒所說：“知識(shí)是一種財(cái)富，但實(shí)踐是打開財(cái)富的鑰匙。”
2015年6月英語六級(jí)考試作文真題第二篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
命題解析
本題要求評(píng)論美國作家Napoleon Hill的一句名言：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事。”并要求舉出一到兩個(gè)例子支持你的觀點(diǎn)。顯而易見，本題考查做小事的重要性。
本題其實(shí)來自于2013年6月的四級(jí)真題：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。
在這道四級(jí)題目中，兒子問父親：“爸爸，我有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心核廢料的處理。”父親回答：“如果你能到了這兒的垃圾桶，你能做任何事情。”題目為做大事之前做小事的重要性，應(yīng)了一句古話：“一屋不掃，何以掃天下?”2015年6月的這道六級(jí)寫作真題其實(shí)與上述四級(jí)真題一脈相承，幾乎是原題重考。
寫作思路指導(dǎo)：
本題第一段應(yīng)該通過做大事和做小事的關(guān)系引出主題;
第二段可以進(jìn)行舉例論證，列舉自己身邊的例子或社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)例子來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)，如雷鋒、焦裕祿等等;
第三段可以進(jìn)行歸納結(jié)論或提出建議措施：大部分人都沒有做大事的可能性，但細(xì)心做好每件小事就是成功。
參考范文：
Success is something that many people strive for, but that not everyone among us attains. When we consider the various factors that play a role in determining whether a person is successful in life, ambition and action are wtwo of the first to come to mind. Just as American writer Napoleon Hill put it, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ”
Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. A young person who aspires to be a great chef might decide to buy some cookbooks, spend weekends practicing and refining his culinary techniques, or take on a part-time job at a local restaurant. On the other hand, if he simply end up spending all has spare time surfing the Internet or playing video games, neither of which would give him the skills or experience needed to succeed。
In conclusion, doing great things and doing small things are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind. The former gives us the drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to implement our vision and “make things happen”. In combination, they represent the winning formula that will put us firmly on the road to success。
參考譯文
成功是許多人所追求的`目標(biāo)，但這個(gè)目標(biāo)非每個(gè)人都能實(shí)現(xiàn)。在考慮到?jīng)Q定一個(gè)人是否成功的因素時(shí)，我們最先想到的兩個(gè)因素世雄心與行動(dòng)。正如美國作家拿破侖 希爾所說：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事。”
可以給出無數(shù)的例子，但這個(gè)就足夠了。一個(gè)渴望成為偉大廚師的人，或許會(huì)決定買一些烹飪書籍，或是把整個(gè)周末的時(shí)間用于改造自己的烹調(diào)技巧，亦或是在當(dāng)?shù)氐囊患也宛^里從事一份兼職工作。相反，如果他只是將所有的閑暇時(shí)間用于上網(wǎng)或玩電子游戲，這些都不能為他帶來成功所需的技巧或經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
總之，做大事和做小事都是決定我們成功與否的重要因素。前者給與我們前進(jìn)的動(dòng)力和方向，后者使我們能夠積極主動(dòng)地實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望。而把兩種因素結(jié)合起來，才是我們走上成功之路的秘訣。
2015年6月英語六級(jí)考試作文真題第三篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
命題解析
本題要求評(píng)論美國科學(xué)家愛因斯坦的一句名言：“我沒有特殊的才能，我只是狂熱地好奇。”同時(shí)要求舉出一到兩個(gè)例子來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。顯而易見，本題的主題是闡述好奇心的重要性。
寫作思路指導(dǎo)：
本文第一段應(yīng)該通過愛因斯坦的這句名言引出主題：好奇心的重要性;
第二段可以舉出一到兩個(gè)例子闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，例如愛迪生搞發(fā)明、牛頓發(fā)現(xiàn)萬有引力、華羅庚學(xué)數(shù)學(xué)等等;
第三段可以進(jìn)行歸納結(jié)論或提出建議措施：如何培養(yǎng)自己的好奇心。
參考范文：
Complexities of human psychology are unlimited, very complicated and often difficult to comprehend. On characteristic of human beings is seldom to be satisfied with what we have and often to want something more or something different. Just as Albert Einstein’s put it, “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ”
If there was no curiosity, we would still be living in the stone ages. Most of us are driven to do things in the most efficient way possible, which leads to experimentation and innovation. This is why we no longer use ice blocks in our refrigerators and why we drive motorized cars instead of horse drawn carriages. We have taken this proclivity to a positive extreme by investigating every aspect of the tangible and intangible world, in the name of satisfying our thirst for knowledge and understanding。
Generally speaking, most people know that they are prone to being curious with the outside world and some try harder than others to control it. How we recognize and deal with these feelings will dictate whether our outcome is constructive or destructive。
參考譯文
人的心理無限復(fù)雜，復(fù)雜到往往難以理解。人的一大特性便是很少滿足現(xiàn)狀，往往想獲得更多的或不一樣的東西。正如阿爾伯特 愛因斯坦所說：“我沒有特殊的才能，我只是狂熱地好奇。”
如果沒有好奇心，現(xiàn)在的人就還會(huì)生活在石器時(shí)代。大多數(shù)人都在尋求最高效的做事方法，從而帶來實(shí)驗(yàn)和創(chuàng)新。正因?yàn)槿绱耍F(xiàn)在的冰箱不再用冰塊制冷，現(xiàn)代人坐的是汽車而不是馬車。為了滿足對(duì)知識(shí)的渴求，人類探索著有形和無形世界的方方面面，從而將這一天性善加利用。
總之，人們多半都有對(duì)外部世界有好奇心的傾向，只是有些人將這一傾向控制得更好罷了。人們?nèi)绾握J(rèn)識(shí)并處理這些情緒將決定其后果是建設(shè)性的還是毀滅性的。
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