雅思寫作示范及技巧全攻略

　　雅思一般指國(guó)際英語語言測(cè)試系統(tǒng)。雅思考試，全稱為國(guó)際英語測(cè)試系統(tǒng)簡(jiǎn)稱雅思，是著名的國(guó)際性英語標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化水平測(cè)試之一。以下是小編為大家收集的雅思寫作示范及技巧全攻略，歡迎大家借鑒與參考，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助。

　　雅思寫作示范及技巧講解

　　Task 2 :

　　Topic: Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain % of these jobs to be reserved for women?

　　You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. You should write a minimum of 250 words. You should use your own ideas﹐knowledge and experience to support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

　　A: 寫作段落大意:

　　1、Introduction - short statement of opinion.

　　2、Body paragraph (1)(2) Different reasons to support opinion. (3) Statement of opposite point of view “balances” essay.

　　3、Conclusion - summarizes Body.

　　B: Model Answers:

　　1、Introduction / opinion

　　Most of the jobs in society that are high-paying，powerful，and demand a lot of responsibility are held by men. I do not believe this situation arose because women are incapable of doing high-level work. I believe society could benefit if more women were in postions of power and therefore I think the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for females.

　　2、Why should government encourage a certain % of high level jobs for women?

　　(first reason)Firstly, the problem of unfair employment distribution appears to come from social convention and not competence or true ability. At a young age most girls are not encouraged to pursue political office, business success, or professional prestige . On the other hand, boys are told to do these things. As a result, men hold the high level jobs but this does not mean they are very good at what they do. If the government set a quota for hiring women to do high level work, such as working in the government itself, then perhaps women would be more inspired to be ambitious in their life plans and contribute to a less-than perfect society.

　　(second reason) Furthermore, regulations in the workplace for hiring women would not be a new thing. Although not written or made into law, there seems to be rules for who can and cannot have high-level jobs. For instance, if a man and a woman both competed for the presidency of a company or even the country, and both were equally qualified and had the same experience and background, there is little doubt who would get the job. Even more, if the man was less qualified and less experienced than the woman, the man would still probably get the job because of his sex. Therefore, to legislate a percentage of high level jobs for women would work to fight the unwritten sexist rules of the workplace.

　　Other points of view: 3-different arguments against my opinion.

　　On the other hand, there are many arguments against the use of a quota system for women. It is true that the injustice and discrimination could be reversed. This is to say that some qualified men might be denied a job while some unqualified women would be given one. Also, the problem of sexism at work could be worsened instead of being overcome. People would doubt whether a women with a high level job was “truly capable” --men might feel bitterness and resentment, while women might think less of themselves and begin to depend on government “charity” Furthermore, there is the problem of defining what is a high-level job and determining an appropriate percentage. ( Final statement that supports my opinion again.)→ Nonetheless, a quota system would break down some barriers in the short-term. Sexism in the workplace will not just magically disappear.

　　3、Conclusion

　　To sum up, I have outlined some advantages and disadvantages of making quotas for the number of women in high level jobs. Despite some of the obvious problems I believe that men and women can and should share power, wealth, and prestige. It is a cause worthy of our efforts.

　　擴(kuò)展資料：

　　重視文章的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)的雅思作文，要想獲得高分其邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)很重要，下面以議論文為例進(jìn)行一下解釋。雅思議論文的準(zhǔn)備首先是邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。也就是說你必須知道議論文分三部分，每部分有哪些思路(每條思路有哪些句型)，這才是你要重點(diǎn)背誦的。議論文的中間段落是拿高分的重點(diǎn)。一般來講有兩種結(jié)構(gòu)模式：立論和駁論。立論的結(jié)構(gòu)是這樣的：(分論點(diǎn))……In other words(解釋論證)……For example(舉例論證)……Conversely(強(qiáng)對(duì)比論證)……這是三種最基本的論證方法�？梢杂靡环N，也可以用兩種或三種。我們要求學(xué)生把論證方法標(biāo)志性的詞匯準(zhǔn)備得背誦下來，以方法考官在閱讀的時(shí)候抓住你的思路。另外一種是駁論：Some people think that (敵人的觀點(diǎn))……， because they think(敵人簡(jiǎn)單的論據(jù))……However， they are oversimplifying the situation. In fact， (敵人的第一條錯(cuò)誤)…….In addtion，(敵人的第二條錯(cuò)誤).Last but not least， (敵人的第三條錯(cuò)誤)…….反駁的時(shí)候說一句話，兩句話還是三句話可以酌情處理。當(dāng)然掌握了這兩種結(jié)構(gòu)以后，還會(huì)有更復(fù)雜的變化，不過它們是基礎(chǔ)。接下來要細(xì)化的就是駁論和論證方法的思路和句型。對(duì)于語言結(jié)構(gòu)我們要求掌握五種基本句型，十四種擴(kuò)展方式;在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上有一些議論文慣用的語言，可以讓你多寫一些單詞。最后還要對(duì)雅思考試�？嫉陌藗�(gè)話題要比較熟悉，找尋觀點(diǎn)，理解了，背下來，考試就更有把握了。

　　重視寫作資料的積累

　　平時(shí)的練習(xí)的時(shí)候建議同學(xué)要多思考雅思最�？嫉脑掝}。如果有比較長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間復(fù)習(xí)，大家可以一邊按照題材總結(jié)收集素材，一邊從寫句子的基本功入手。每個(gè)話題的每道題目，先總結(jié)好中文的分論點(diǎn)和分論點(diǎn)的論證。注意，中文一定要簡(jiǎn)單，清晰，不要有太多修飾；然后自己每天把其中的幾段寫成英文，最好寫NATIVE SPEAKER幫忙改一下。如此做100個(gè)段落以上的積累，英語寫作水平就會(huì)有質(zhì)的提高。

　　重視中英文作文寫作思路的差異

　　有很多同學(xué)會(huì)在有這樣的疑問，中文作文寫的很好，但是英文作文卻總是難以取得高分，歸結(jié)起來原因還是在于寫作思路上存在著很大的差異和區(qū)別。英文喜歡的是直線思維。不需要太麻煩。所以在結(jié)構(gòu)上可以按照駁論和立論的模式展開，當(dāng)然還有一種駁一半。因?yàn)橐环N觀點(diǎn)總有合理和不合理的兩面。所以在復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)的結(jié)構(gòu)中，可以把這兩個(gè)方面都寫出來。而中文的寫作思路恰恰與英文相反，講求更加含蓄的'表達(dá)，也并非是直線思維，因此也就出現(xiàn)了中文作文優(yōu)秀但英文作文卻不理想的情況。因此同學(xué)們?cè)趥淇嫉倪^程中要注重這種差異，在復(fù)習(xí)的過程中有意識(shí)的訓(xùn)練自己的英文寫作思路。

　　重視寫作提速

　　寫作的速度涉及到三方面的問題，需要同學(xué)們給予足夠的重視。一是構(gòu)思的速度。你需要對(duì)雅思最�？嫉念}材比較熟悉。第二，是對(duì)句型的熟悉。什么意思用什么句型只有通過多寫多練才會(huì)有積累才會(huì)提高寫作速度。第三是寫單詞的速度，尤其是長(zhǎng)單詞。要求在平時(shí)練習(xí)的時(shí)候一定要寫，而不是想，即使這個(gè)單詞你會(huì)背也一定要寫下來。

　　巧用寫作模版

　　關(guān)于模板，我曾問過不止一位考官。他們的回答是，模板不是不能用，但是一定要恰當(dāng)。他們最討厭的模板是there are two sides of every coin...所以沒有萬能模板，你只有把議論文的每部分可能的情況和句型背清楚，然后才能選擇使用。換言之，模板是有的，但是沒有一個(gè)萬能模板。寫作是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)期積累的過程。前不久一個(gè)山東的同學(xué)告訴我她壓中了雅思的寫作考題，事先也經(jīng)過了精心地準(zhǔn)備，結(jié)果得了3.5分。她的問題是她準(zhǔn)備的范文有一半以上的單詞在任何一篇文章都是一樣的。大家一定要特別小心不要評(píng)價(jià)類的準(zhǔn)備一篇范文，優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的準(zhǔn)備一篇，原因建議的準(zhǔn)備一篇（而且我本人并不同義這種分類方式）。關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯如果文章的長(zhǎng)度足夠，盡量簡(jiǎn)單清晰。所以歸根結(jié)底還是要對(duì)論述的話題熟悉，你自然就不會(huì)寫那么多廢話了。

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