例句使用太陽能的優(yōu)點是它不會制造任何污染，九形容詞主詞句子如此以致于，兩種旅行方式的好處你更喜歡哪種旅行方式為什么，用于提出兩種不同的觀點態(tài)度或喜好，引導讓步狀語從句從長遠來看對不利引用諺語結尾值得借
寫作優(yōu)美句子
英語四六級:作文加分句型
一、the+est+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
themost+形容詞+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.
海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。
Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.
張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。
二、Nothingis+~~~erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+V例句：Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.
沒有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.(再怎么強調...的重要性也不為過。)例句：Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我們再怎么強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。
四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否認的...)
例句：Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經(jīng)每況愈下。
五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句：Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。
六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~(毫無疑問的...)
例句：Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。
七、Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子(...的優(yōu)點是...)
例句：Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon'tcreate(produce)anypollution.使用太陽能的優(yōu)點是它不會制造任何污染。
八、Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子(...的原因是...)
例句：Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair./Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。
九、So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：Sopreciousistimethatwecan'taffordtowasteit.
時間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費它。
十、Adj+as+Subject(主詞)+be,S+V~~~(雖然...)
例句：Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一點也不}
雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質絕對令人不滿意。
十一、The+er+S+V,the+er+S+V,The+more+Adj+S+V,the+more+Adj+S+V(愈...愈...)例句：Theharderyouwork,themoreprogreyoumake.
你愈努力，你愈進步。
Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.
我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學問。
十二、By+Ving,~~can~~(借著...，..能夠..)
例句：Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.
借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。
十三、~~~enable+Object(受詞)+to+V(..使..能夠..)
例句：Listeningtomusicenablesustofeelrelaxed.
聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。
十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~(我們絕對不能...)
例句：Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.
我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。
英語四級作文預測及范文(一)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTravelAloneorTravelwitha
Companion?Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)有的人喜歡獨自旅行，有的人喜歡與別人結伴而行
2)兩種旅行方式的好處3)你更喜歡哪種旅行方式，為什么?
TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?
___________________________________________________________行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的旅行方
式，提綱第2點要求分別闡述兩種旅行方式的好處，提綱第3點要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出人們對旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜歡獨自旅行，有人喜歡結伴旅行;對比闡述獨自旅行
和結伴旅行各自的好處;表明“我”更喜歡于哪種旅行方式，并說明理由。字串3
高分范文
TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?
[1]Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.[2]Somepeopleliketotravelalone,
[2]whileothersprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Ofcourse,everyonehashisconsiderationforhispreference.
[4]Travelingalone,onecanenjoymorefreedom.The
travelercanarrangehistourashewisheswithoutthetroubleofhumoringothers.[3]Moreover,travelingalone[5]tendtobringthetraveler[6]unexpectedsurprise,[7]suchasmakinganewfriendandenjoyingadifferentscenery.[8]Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoits
advantages.[3]Foronething,thegroupmemberscanhelpandlookaftereachotherinthejourney.[3]Foranother,
[4]travelingwithotherswhohavesameinterest,youcansharecostsandexperienceswiththem.
[9]Astome,Iprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Firstly,wecandealwiththepossibleproblemsanddifficultiesinthejourney.[3]Secondly,Iliketosharethepleasureoftravelingwithothers.[3]Insum,[10]bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.
【亮點點評】[1]“當涉及到或談到時”。[2]用于提出兩種不同的觀點、態(tài)度或喜好。[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[4]現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。[5]“傾向，趨于”。[6]“意外的驚喜”。[7]表示列舉。[8]“和相比”。[9]用于引出自己的觀點或選擇。[10]“或者，或者”。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.
臨摩：當談到是否應該取消“黃金周”假期時，人們的看法各不相同。__________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages.
臨摩：和城市相比，鄉(xiāng)村的經(jīng)濟相對落后。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：Bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.臨摩：網(wǎng)絡教學和傳統(tǒng)教學都有其各自的優(yōu)點，因此，我們應該將二者相結合。____________________________________________
【KEY】
1.Whenitcomestowhetherweshouldcancelthe“goldenweek”holiday,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.
http://emrowgh.com paredwiththecities,thecountrysideisrelativelybackwardineconomy.
3.Bothnetworkteachingandtraditionalschoolteachinghavetheiradvantages.Therefore,weshouldcombinethesetwoteachingways.
英語四級作文預測及范文(二)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheMoonlightClan.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)現(xiàn)在很多年輕人每個月都把自己賺的錢花光他們被稱作“月族”
2)有人認為這是一種時尚的消費觀念，但很多人反對這樣消費
3)我對此的看法是
TheMoonlightClan
__________________________________________________________行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點針對該現(xiàn)象提出兩種不同的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述“月光族”現(xiàn)象，引出對這一現(xiàn)象的不同看法;對比闡述兩種看法各自的理由;表明“我”對“月光族”的看法并說明理由。高分范文如下:
TheMoonlightClan
Nowadays,moreandmorepeople,[1]especiallytheyoungarejoininginthearmyof“themoonlightclan”.Thesepeopleexhausttheirearningseverymonthwithoutanysavings.[2]Manypeoplethinkthisisafashionablelifestyle,[2]whilemoreotherpeopleobjecttothiskindofconsumptionstyle.
[3]Thosewhosupport“themoonlightclan”thinkthatthosepeopleknowhowtoenjoylifeandhaveahigherlifequality.[3]However,moreotherpeoplecriticize“the
moonlightclan”.Theysaythattheconsumptionhabitof“themoonlightclan”isunhealthyandsometimeswasteful.In
addition,nosavingswill[4]place“themoonlightclan”inadifficultposition[5]incaseofunexpectedexpenses.
[6]Weighingthesetwoarguments,Iprefertothelatterone.Inmyeyes,[7]though“themoonlightclan”mayacquire
temporarysatisfactionfromtheirconsumption,[8]inthelongterm,it[9]isunfavorabletotheirfamilyandcareer.[10]Justasaproverbsays,oneshouldalwaysprepareforarainyday.
【亮點點評】[1]“尤其，特別”[2]用于提出兩種對立觀點[3]用于引出兩種對立觀點各自的理由。[4]“使處于艱難的境地”[5]“以防，萬一”[6]用于表明“我”的傾向。[7]though引導讓步狀語從句[8]“從長遠來看”[9]“對不利”[10]引用諺語結尾，值得借鑒。佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Manypeoplethinkthisisafashionablelifestyle,whilemoreotherpeopleobjecttothiskindofconsumptionstyle.臨摩：勇敢的人往往會獲得更多的機會，而懦弱的人面對機會也有可能錯過。
________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Thosewhosupport“themoonlightclan”thinkthatthosepeopleknowhowtoenjoylifeandhaveahigherlifequality.
臨摩：持悲觀態(tài)度的那些人認為地球上有限的能源很快就會枯竭。_______________________________________________________
3.佳句：Justasaproverbsays,oneshouldalwaysprepareforarainyday.
臨摩：正如一句諺語所說的，“機會只給那些有準備的人。”
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1.Bravepeopletendtogetmoreopportunitieswhiletimidonesmaymithemwhenchancescome.
2.Thosewhoholdpessimisticattitudesthinkthatlimitedenergyonearthwillbeexhaustedsoon.
3.Justasaproverbsays,“Opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds.”
四六級寫作備考：社會熱點的兩種寫作模式
寫作部分在四六級的考試中占15%，對于保通過的同學這部分至少應能保證及格，對于沖擊高分的學員，這部分也是個高分突破點。據(jù)我們科學估計，在最后四周內，只要有針對的進行安排時間，對許多考生來說寫作仍有至少20分的提升空間。使用那些材料才能有效的最大限度地拿分呢？
倒數(shù)第三周：準備項目：對于社會熱點問題和熱議現(xiàn)象，四六級作文也希望大學生有自己的見解和主張，比如盜版現(xiàn)象，電子書，以及一次性塑料袋等。準備重點：對于這一命題，我們主要以兩種模板來應對兩種寫作模式。一種以社會熱點引出的問題開頭，著重于現(xiàn)象背后的緣由以及其解決方案。另一種以分析可爭議問題的兩面性為主體。準備內容：HotIssue型(1)模板一
Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemthat______________(主題問題).Accordingly,_______________________________(伴隨主題問題出現(xiàn)的新問題)isbecomingmoreandmoreserious。Confrontedwith___________________________(主題問題)，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,_________________________(解決方法1).Foranother,_________________________________(解決方法2).Finally,_________________________________(解決方法3)。
AsfarasIamconcerned,thebestwayoutis
________________________(解決方法3).Consequently,I’m
confidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause
____________________(解決方法3的優(yōu)點和好處)。
(2)模板二
Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,withtheadventof_____________(相關事物或現(xiàn)象)，wehavetofaceaproblemthat______________________(主題問題)。
Whatarethereasonsforit?Inthefollowingparagraphs,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,
_____________________(闡述原因1).Moreover,
__________________(闡述原因2).Inaddition,
_______________________(闡述原因3)。
Inviewoftheseriousneoftheproblem,effective
measuresshouldbetaken.Foronething,itishightimethatpeoplealloverChinarealizedtheimportanceof
__________________(解決主題問題).Foranother,the
governmentshouldissuestrictlawsandregulationsinordertoputthesituationundercontrol。
利弊型(1)模板一
Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer__________(主題)becauseitplaysasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.Ontheonehand,
________________(主題的優(yōu)點1).Ontheotherhand,
___________________(主題的優(yōu)點2)。
Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegative
aspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat___________________(主題的缺點1).Tomakemattersworse,__________________________(主題的缺點2)。
Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsfaroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,________(主題)itselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdetermineitsvaluetooursociety。
(2)模板二
Withthedevelopmentofscienceandhumancivilization,manyformerlyunimaginablethingscomeintoreality.Someofthemhavepositiveeffectsonourlife,butsomearedistasteful.Thephenomenonof________(主題現(xiàn)象)isanexampleoftheformer/latterone。
Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforit,andthefollowingarethemostconspicuousaspects.Tostartwith,__________________(原因1).Furthermore,
______________________(原因2).Eventually,
__________________________(原因3)。
Goodas____________(主題現(xiàn)象)is,ithas,unfortunately,itsdisadvantages.Theapparentexampleisthat___________(缺點例子1).Inaddition,___________(缺點例子2)。
Onthewhole, http://emrowgh.com (主題現(xiàn)象)andmakeourlifemorecomfortable。
時間安排：這一部分作文是議論和說明寫作方法并存，屬于備考的重點，建議每個模板都可以套用2個真題或模擬題練習。,
作文寫作優(yōu)美句子
一、
圖畫描述段
主要原則：
簡單化原則零錯誤原則純原則語法結構：定語從句+插入語
描述圖畫的形容詞thought-provoking/compelling/profound/instructive/enlightening
1.Thesatiricalsketchgraphicallyportraysasceneinwhich______________________Itisgraphically/vividly/symbolicallyillustrated/demonstratedinthe圖that___________
2.1)Whatmakesthedrawingstriking/intriguing/compellingisthefactthat__________
2)Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingis(thefact)that____________________
3)Asissymbolicallydepictedinthe(first/left-handed)圖，____________________
3.其他描寫
4.字幕1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“____________________________”
2)Thecaptionreads“___________”/Thecaptionindicatesthat“___________”
5.總結（不要用太難的表達，把圖總結即可，不一定需要）
Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indisputably______________________________三大套路
1.Ving的處理
1）Standingbytheriverside,theMastersighed,“Maytimepaonandonlikethis,neverceasingdayandnight.”
2）Flutteringthroughtheair,wedancewingtowing,lifeafterlife,foreverapair.
2.ADJ+N
3.=with+N
Withpassion/difficulty/optimism/confidence/joy/enthusiasm/grief/sorrow…..
單圖：2016合作
Theimpressiveandthought-provokingcartoongraphicallyportraysamovingsceneinvovingtwohandicappedmen.(Depictedinthethought-provokingcartoonaretwohandicappedmen.)Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthetwocripples,leavingtheircrutchesbehindandsupportingeachotherwiththeirpowerfulhands,arewalkingforwardwithconfidenceandoptimism.Inaddtion,weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”
Asisillustratedinthethought-provokingcartoon,anoptimisticandconfidentman,takingoffhisclothes,isrushingtowardonabridgefrom“poverty”to“prosperity”.Whatmakesthedrawingintriguingisthatthebridgeisentitled/markedas“reasonablesystem”.Unquestionably,itisthepositivepoliticsthathasbridgedthegapbetweenthepoorandtherich.
雙圖：2006小貝頭
Asisvividlydepictedinthephotosabove,Beckham,thehandsomeBritishfootballsuperstar, http://emrowgh.com hefirstphoto,Beckham’snameappearsonayoungman’ http://emrowgh.com hesecondphoto,thisyoungmanisdoingBeckham’schichairstyleinabarbershop.Weareinformedthatheisspending300yuanimitatinghisidol’shairdo.
二、闡述段
天龍八部三分天下
食品安全問題
到底什么是天龍八部？簡單理解，就是八個可以在第二段當中構思的方面。第二段最好是總分總的夾心式寫法。其中最最最關鍵的是現(xiàn)狀分析，原因分析和后果分析。注意到，這八個方面是可以構思的方面，不是要都寫，都寫的話，這一段一般人過200，高手過1000.P2注意盡量控制在6-7句以內.
1.由淺入深：Simpleasthepictureis,theconnotationbehinditshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwithmoreinsightandpenetration.
2.深層含義：Undoubtedly,thepurposeofthepictureistoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.
3.現(xiàn)狀（羅列除了很多可以參考的寫法）
1）Thepastseveralyearshaswitnessed/experiencedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowing/increasing/expanding/mountingnumberssufferedfromthesevereconsequenceofunsafefood.
2）Theunprecedentedeconomicdevelopmentoverthepastseveralyearsisaccompaniedbythedramaticincreaseofunsafefood.
3）Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkwhichresultsinprevalentinfantkidneyproblem,andeggswhichcontainundesirablechemicalfactors,allofwhicharesoundinganalarmtooursociety.
4.原因（寫一條就可以，不寫也沒問題，但是要讓文章顯得有深度最好分析一下原因）
1).人們?yōu)榱俗非罄麧�，而喪失了道德底線
2).國家監(jiān)管不力，相關法律并未完善，給了不法分子漏洞
3).萬能BT理由，社會壓力巨大。（withthequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,imposingtremendouspressureonallindividuals.）
1）Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.
2）Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.（1，2兩句作用相同，都是引出兩條原因。注意沒必要兩條，一條就夠，兩條主要是為了層次感）
3）具體的兩條理由，Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyeto/totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.
Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.
（*）現(xiàn)狀+原因（單原因）(其中還有象征點的寫法出現(xiàn))
Theirresponsibleteacherdepictedinthepictureisnaturallyassociatedwithagreatnumberofprofessorsinreallife,whoareonlyinpursuitoftheirresearchpapersandtitles,whiletotallyturningablindeyetotheirobligationasqualifiededucators,forthereasonthatagreatnumberofcollegesanduniversitiesregardthenumberofpapersasanessentialstandardtojudgeateacher.
5.后果/影響
Professionaldishonestynotonlyadverselyaffectsthehealthconditionofnumerousconsumers,butalsoposesaprobableandpotentialthreatonsocialstability.
壞：1.Adverselyaffect
2.poseaprobableandpotentialthreaton
3.exerta(n)unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negativeconsequenceon
4.soundanalarmto
5.putanenormouspressureupon
好：1.Layasolidfoundationfor
2.exerta(n)positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficialimpacton
3.playa(n)vital/crucial/irreplaceablerolein
4.serveasacatalystfor
教授的職責：Theindifferentattitudetowardseducationnotonlyunderminestheteachingqualityofuniversitiesandadverselyaffectsstudents’desireforknowledge,butalsosoundsanalarmtoeducationsystemincontemporarysociety.
Undeniably,thisphenomenonwillreducetheeducationquality.Andstudentsontheotherhand,willhavenospecificandprofessionalinstruction.
6.舉例說明Itcanbebestexemplifiedbythecaseofpoisonousmilkandotherdangerousfood.(其實就是聯(lián)系實際，也可以說就是現(xiàn)狀的具體體現(xiàn))
參考：2006：小貝頭
Undoubtedly,thephotoshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthatidolworshipisprevalentamongtheyouthnowadays.Beckhamrepresentstheimageofsportherowhosehandsomeappearanceandunparalleledfootballskillsarepassionatelyadoredbyallthesportsfans.Likewise,severalteenagegirlswontheirfameovernightinThe2005SuperGirlContestinChina,whichprovokednationwidenoisydebatesonthevalueandharmofadmiringtheseidols.Generallyspeaking,youngpeopleareinclinedtoadorethepeoplewhoexcelinappearance,intelligenceortalent.
7.層進的修辭手法和轉折的運用
Itisundeniablethatwemustbehonest,whichshouldbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandshared(advocated) http://emrowgh.com
8.威脅性總結
Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeuncurbed.
增補：虛擬語氣版：
Werethesituationtocontinue,itwouldbecomeuncontrollable.
考研第二段就是以上內容的合理整合，加上第一句的論點
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.
和最后一句的結論（威脅性總結）Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
中間插入3-4句論據(jù)即可，成為一個夾心式的寫法。一定不能寫太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句沖頂。
版本一論點+原因+結論（黑字是第二段首尾，幾個版本都不變，其他是根據(jù)剛才的分析加入的論據(jù)）
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewhole
marketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
版本二：論點+現(xiàn)狀+層進+結論
頭尾兩句不變
Simpleasthepictureis, http://emrowgh.com （最后一句可省，因為太長了）
版本三：論點+后果+結論
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Professionaldishonestyundoubtedlyexertsanadverseconsequenceonoursociety.Initially,theyadverselyaffectthehealthconditionofnumerousconsumers,forthereasonthatconsumerscannoteasilyrecognizethem.Additionally,fakegoodsposeaprobableandpotentialthreatonournationaleconomy,because/asconsumersdonotbelievethemarketsystem.Inotherwords,thisphenomenonwillunderminethewholebusiness.Finally,wehavebusinewithforeigncountries.Iffakegoodsarediscoveredintheoverseastrade,itwillundoubtedlyexertanegativeinfluenceonourreputation.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.（最后一句可省，因為太長了）
版本四：論點+現(xiàn)狀+一點原因+一點后果+結論
1)Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.2)Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkandeggs,becauseagreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyetothebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.3)Inotherwords,professionaldishonestyundoubtedlyexertsanadverseconsequenceonoursociety.4)Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
1)是深刻含義；2）是現(xiàn)狀+一點原因；3）是后果；4）是威脅性總結
西部大開發(fā)
1.由淺入深Simpleasthepictureis,theconnotationbehinditshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwithmoreinsightandpenetration.
2.深刻含義Undoubtedly,thispictureisthought-provoking,inthatitendeavorstoconvinceusthatthedevelopmentofthewesternparthasbeenaprevalentandpervasiveissue.
3.現(xiàn)狀：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumbershaveparticipatedinthecampaign.
或：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedtheincreasing/soaringpassion(enthusiasm)ofpeopletojoinintheprocess.補充：參與/投身于的其他寫法beengagedindevoteoneselfin
4.原因：
1)東西部差異大，東部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地區(qū)仍然貧窮
2)這是和諧社會共同發(fā)展的需要。
3）BT理由，壓力巨大。（稍微改寫下，西部壓力大就可以了）
這里暫且寫一條：Somepeopleinthedevelopedareasareleadingaluxuriouslifewhileinsomeunderdevelopedregions,agreatnumberofpeoplearestilllivinginsheerpoverty.
5.影響
1）可以有效解決東西部發(fā)展不均衡的問題
2）極大提高西部人民的生活水平
3）可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平
一個詞：深遠！
Themovement,directlyorindirectly,willexertafar-reachinginfluenceonthewesternareaseventhecountryasawhole.Itcannotonlyalleviate(減輕緩和，不會的話換relieve)thepovertyoftheunderdevelopedareas,butalsolayasolidfoundationfortheeducationleveloftheregioneffectivelyandefficiently.
6.層進西部大開發(fā)應該被accepted,appreciatedandadvocated.
7.反面論證：要是國家不注意均衡發(fā)展，只顧東部，整個國家就會。
Supposeourgovernmentdoesnotpayenoughattentiontothewest,ourwholecountrywouldbecomeunbalancedandunabletosurviveandthrive(intheruthleandrelentlecompetition)或者正面總結：Generallyspeaking,thephenomenonwouldcontinuetoexertabeneficialinfluenceonoursociety,ifitiswidelyaccepted,appreciatedandadvocated.
注：本文并未采用舉例說明的論證手段
三分天下法：
Undoubtedly,thesubtleconnotationofthepictureendeavorstoconvinceusthatthedevelopmentofthewesternparthasbeenaprevalentandpervasiveissue.(論點)Thedrawingisthought-provoking,inthatitcontainsthreelayersofprofoundmeaning.（過渡句）Initially,thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumbershaveparticipatedinthecampaign.Additionally,somepeopleinthedevelopedareasareleadingaluxuriouslifewhileinsomeunderdevelopedregions,agreatnumberofpeoplearestilllivinginsheerpoverty.Finally,themovement,directlyorindirectly,willexertafar-reachinginfluenceonthewesternareaseventhecountryasawhole.Generallyspeaking,supposeourgovernmentdoesnotpayenoughattentiontothewest,ourwholecountrywouldbecomeunbalancedandunabletosurviveandthrive(intheruthleandrelentlecompetition)（結論）
總共6句話
第一句仍然直接說出深層含義（由淺入深的寫法確實是比較弱智）
第二句是關鍵：這是一句過渡句，提示閱卷人，我接下來要分三點來分析這個問題，自己制造這句話，可以避免模板同時還可以提示脈絡同時還可以順便湊個字數(shù)
例句如下：
1.Thispictureisthought-provokinginthatitconveysthefollowingthreelayersofsubtleconnotations.
2.Thesubtleimplicationcanbeanalyzedinthefollowingthreeinterrelatedaspects.
3.Inordertoderiveprofoundimplicationfromit,wecandissectthisenlighteningpictureinthefollowingthreeaspects.
以上三句話的意思無非就是：考官注意啊，我要寫三點了！
然后開始寫自己的1，2，3每點一句話（當然如果你可以多寫幾句也不是問題，控制時間
就OK）
第三句是第一點，initially/tobeginwith/firstandforemost
第四句是第二點，additionally/what’smore/moreover/furthermore
第五句是第三點，finally/lastbutnotleast
至于最后一句第六句，以前怎么總結，現(xiàn)在還怎么總結，注意關聯(lián)詞Generallyspeaking。2016年：合作
【審題構思】
第一段解析：這是一道單圖題。圖畫中是兩個都只有一條腿的人，丟開了拐杖，互相攙扶著往前走。文字說明：“你一條腿，我一條腿；你我一起，走南闖北�！备鶕�(jù)我們課堂的講解，單圖題第一段寫3句。圖畫描述應有兩句，挖掘兩個可寫點，串成兩句簡單描述即可。最后一句可以對圖畫進行挖掘后總結，比如“他們有了互相的幫助，自信而樂觀的迎接著挑戰(zhàn)”(Undoubtedly,witheachother’shelp,theyareembracingtheupcomingchallengeswithconfidenceandoptimism)也可以對文字說明進行簡單翻譯，也就是我們課堂解釋過的Thecaptionreads/indicates,或者Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”最后一句還可以簡單發(fā)表評論，說明合作的重要性，但第一段始終是描述段，對深刻含義的評論不宜過多，一句即可，否則跑題。
不少考生反映，這一段最難的寫的是“拐杖”這個詞語。Crutch對于考研的同學來說屬于極其生僻的詞語，改卷者也明白這個道理。只要你把這個意思表達出來就可以了，我們一直強調“第一秒寫不出，第二秒換說法”，這里可以寫為Supportingtools/assistantequipment/supportingsticks等等。
第二段解析：根據(jù)我們一直講解的“天龍八部”寫法，第二段應滿足總分總的寫法（或者是總分）。第一句要點明蘊涵在簡單圖畫中的大道理，作為全段的主題句（論點），結尾最好以Generallyspeaking之類的關聯(lián)詞總結全段（結論）。中間的論據(jù)我們可以選擇事實和現(xiàn)狀描述，問題背景，原因或后果，層進，舉例說明�？梢苑治霈F(xiàn)代社會合作的原因和必要性，可以描述合作在各個領域里的現(xiàn)狀（如個人層面，企業(yè)層面，社會層面），可以討論合作的好處，可以聯(lián)系實際，舉例說明合作的重要性。論點一句，論據(jù)4-5句，結論一句，第二段6-7句。
第三段解析：注意到提綱規(guī)定是“comments”。我們曾經(jīng)對這個詞進行過深入分析，水平高的同學可以自己發(fā)表議論，水平一般的人，可以把comments理解為suggestions,于是回到我們最熟悉的建議措施段，壞事當然提建議，好事也可以提出建議，使其變得更好。在這一段里，主題句一句，從意義過渡到建議上來；具體評論或措施2句，寫出層次感；總結加展望未來一句，第三段4句。注意：考研寫作的觀點并無對錯之分，只要不跑題即可。06年可以寫追星的負面意義，也可以正面挖掘積極方面；07年可以寫為自信，也可以寫為挑戰(zhàn)，人生意義。08年的寫作，寫為合作，互相幫助，困難中互相扶持均屬合理。在考研寫作三大要素語言結構思路里，思路始終是次要的。關鍵是語言基本正確，結構清晰，邏輯嚴謹。
【參考范文】
Theimpressiveandthought-provokingcartoongraphicallyportraysamovingsceneinvovingtwohandicappedmen.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthetwocripples,leavingtheircrutchesbehindandsupportingeachotherwiththeirpowerfulhands,arewalkingforwardwithconfidenceandoptimism.Inaddtion,weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoinformusthatdueattentionhasto
bepaidtotheissueofcooperation,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Onaccountofthequickeningpaceoflife,unprecedentedcompetitioninallwalksoflifemakesitdifficultforasingleindividualtofinishanarduoustaskallbyhimself.Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedtheincreaseofcollaborationbothacademicallyandprofessionally.Ontheonehand,scholarsandscientistsbenefitconsiderablyfromthecoordinateeffortsamongavarietyofuniversities.Ontheotherhand,teamworkamongdifferentcompaniesexertsanundeniablyfar-reachingimpactontheirdevelopment.Generallyspeaking,ifwewereisolatedfromthesociety,wewouldfeeldesperateintheruthleandrelentlecompetition.
Accordingly,itisimperativeforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromtheprofoundpicture.Foronething,weshouldbeeducatedandenlightenedtoenhancetheawareneofcooperation.Foranother,wecantakeadvantageoftheadvancedscienceandtechnologytohelpusworkwithotherseffectivelyandefficiently.Itisinthiswaythatwecanmakeoursocietydevelopinaprosperous,harmoniousanddynamicdirection.
2016年：網(wǎng)絡的近與遠
天龍八部之壞事版
Apparently,thepurposeofthesketchistoconvinceusthatconsiderableemphasishastobeplacedupontheissueofInternetcommunication,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactpeopleinincreasingnumbersareaddictedtothecyberworld,forthereasonthatsurfingonlinecanprovidethemwithfascinationandrecreation.Regrettably,wearesoobsessedwiththevirtualworldthatwealmostturnablindeyetotherealinterpersonalcommunicationaroundus,whichnotonlyposesapotentialandprobablethreatonournormalcontactwithotherpeople,butalsomakesourlifeisolated.Generallyspeaking,hardlycanwemaintainphysicalandpsychologicalhealthifweweredeprivedofsocialcommunication.
4句話。第一句點明主旨：網(wǎng)絡交流問題
第二句現(xiàn)狀+原因分析：很多人沉迷于網(wǎng)絡世界，因為網(wǎng)絡的誘惑和娛樂。
第三句轉折+結果：我們太迷戀而忽視了人際交往，這樣對正常交流不好，也讓我們隔絕開來
第四句威脅性總結
三分天下之壞事版
Apparently,thepurposeofthesketchistoconvinceusthatconsiderableemphasishastobeplacedupontheissueofInternetcommunication,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Thispictureisthought-provoking,inthatitcontainsthefollowingthreelayersofmeanings.Initially,nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactpeopleinincreasingnumbersareaddictedtothecyberworld,forthereasonthatsurfingonlinecanprovidethemwithfascinationandrecreation.Additionally,wearesoobsessedwiththevirtualworldthatwealmostturnablindeyetotherealinterpersonalcommunicationaroundus.Finally,hardlycanwemaintainclosecontactwithpeople,bothindividuallyandsocially,ifwefailtoattachgreatimportancetosocialcommunication.
5句話。第一句深刻含義
第二句過渡句
第三四五句分論點1，2，3
雙刃劍版
Apparently,thepictureisametaphorofathought-provokingphenomenon:theInternetisa
double-edgedsword.(Ontheonehand)ThepastseveralyearsareaccompaniedbyunprecedenteddevelopmentoftheInternet,andpeopleinmountingnumbersarebenefitingfromitsamazingconvenienceincommunication.Itcanbeaptlyexemplifiedbytheeffectiveandefficient“chattingtools(softwares)”rangingfromQQtoMSN.Regrettably(Ontheotherhand),unabletoresistthefascinationandtemptationofthecyberworld,agreatnumberofpeoplefailtonoticetheimportanceofsocialactivitiesandinterpersonalcommunication.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thephenomenonwouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable/peoplewouldsufferfromseverecommunicationcrisis.
5句話
第一句點明主旨雙刃劍。
第二句說明網(wǎng)絡發(fā)展對交流的好處--拉近我們的距離
第三句舉例說明好處（2，3兩句是正面描述）
第四句說明沉迷網(wǎng)絡缺乏交流的現(xiàn)狀
第五句威脅性說明網(wǎng)絡的壞處--拉遠了我們的距離（交流危機）（4，5兩句是反面描述）
三、建議措施段/評論看法段
1.國家立法2人民教育/喚起意識3媒體宣傳4.自己做起5.自由發(fā)揮
Accordingly,itisimperativeforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromtheprofoundpicture.Foronething,weshouldbeeducatedandenlightenedtoenhancetheawareneofcooperation.Foranother,wecantakeadvantageoftheadvancedscienceandtechnologytohelpusworkwithotherseffectivelyandefficiently.Itisinthiswaythatwecanmakeoursocietyprosperous,harmoniousandvigorous.
四、舉例論證段（2001，2004，2016）
Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof“ShenzhouⅤspacecraft”whichsetsChinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepathistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Instead,weareconfrontedwiththechallengeofconqueringthedifficultgraduatecourses.Westillhavetostriveforsucceinourfutureacademicstudy,employmentandcareer.Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“Destinationisanotherstartingpoint.”
十大話題：
一.
人口問題
二.
西部大開發(fā)
三.
網(wǎng)絡和雙刃劍（金錢，陽光）
四.
成功，夢想和現(xiàn)實
五.
職業(yè)選擇和規(guī)劃/高分低能
六.
洋節(jié)和傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日
七.
神七上天和嫦娥奔月
八.
地震與愛心
九.
奧運舉辦
十.
抄襲與誠信
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從現(xiàn)狀（實際生活例子），原因，結果（后果或者影響）,建議措施四大方向來分析小作文部分
開門見山說意圖
咨詢建議一二三
不同內容可分段
感謝客氣不可少
期待回信成慣例
2006年真題解析
YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.
Don'tsignyourownname...."LiMing"instead.Don'twritetheaddress.
Towhomitmayconcern,
IwishtocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Havingconceivedsuchaplanforalongperiod,Iwritethislettertorequestyourhelptorecommendacandidate.
Iwonderifitisconvenientforyouiftwothingsconcerningthechildaretakenintoconsideration.First,thechildshouldcomefromGuiZhouProvincebecauseIintendtohelpachildfrommyhometown.Second,itwillbebetterifthechildisaprimaryschoolstudent.Actually,Iamgoodatteachingmathematicsatelementarylevel.
Myplanwillbecarriedoutasfollows.First,Iwillremitatleast300yuanincasheverymonthsoastoreducethefinancialburdenofthefamily.Moreimportantly,IdecidetoteachthechildmathandEnglishinpersonduringmysummervacation,whichwillsurelybemorebeneficialtothechild.
Ireallyappreciateyourhelp,andIlookforwardtoyourreplyassoonaspossible.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
感謝信
Directions:
Yourdelegation（代表團）hasjustreturnedfromavisittoauniversityinGreatBritain.AndyouwerewarmlytreatedtherebyProfessorHerthwell.Pleasewritealettertoexpreyourthankstohimforhishospitalityandhopeforfurthercooperation.
DearProf.Herthwell,（告訴了名字，又知道是教授，最好這么稱呼）
Iamwritingthislettertoexpremysinceregratitudeforyourkindhospitalityyoushowedto
ourdelegationduringourvisitinyouruniversity.(寫信意圖：感謝對方的熱情招待)
Iamindebtedtoyourgeneroushelptoourvisit.Itwasniceofyoutointroducemetosomanyofyourfamousprofessorsatyouruniversity.Inaddition,weappreciatetheaccommodationyouprovidedforus.WehadafantastictimeinBritainandwillneverforgetit.（感激內容：鑒于這是感謝信，內容發(fā)生在過去，在這里套用Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldtakeintoconsideration是不太合適的。用關聯(lián)詞1，2，3也顯得呆板。于是調整了一下，大意是：我感激你的慷慨幫助。你介紹了很多教授給我認識。另外，（INADDITION，不用1，2，3了），提供的住宿很好，我們很爽，絕對不會忘記）（注意時態(tài)）
Meanwhile,Ihopeyouwillsomedaypayashortvisittoouruniversityandgiveussomelectureson“ModernWesternEconomics”.(這句是提綱要求hopeforfurthercooperation.不寫的話嚴重扣分)(或者Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldpayashortvisittoouruniversity)Ifyouhaveinterestinouruniversity,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.
YoursSincerely
LiMing
段落句子分布詳情
1-4-2總共7句，113字，已經(jīng)超綱
詢問信
Directions:Youwanttostudyatacertainforeignuniversity.Writealettertoaskaboutthesituationthereasregardswhatqualificationsoneneedsforacceptance,fees,possiblescholarships,andaccommodation.
DearSirorMadam,
IamaChinesestudentwhowishestoapplyforadmissionintoyourprestigiousuniversity.Myplanistostartmycoursenextterm,andIwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbekindenoughtoprovidemewithcertainessentialinformation.
First,whatqualificationsdoIneedtofollowacourseofstudyatyouruniversity?Ihavealreadyhadabachelor’sdegreefromBeijingUniversity,butIwonderifthereareanyfurtheracademicrequirements.Second,howmucharethetuitionfees?AlthoughIintendtobeself-supporting,Iwouldbeinterestedtohearifthereareanyscholarshipsavailableforinternationalstudents.Third,whatisthesituationregardingaccommodation?
Ilookforwardtoyourreply,andtoattendingyouresteemedinstitution.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
推薦信
Towhomitmayconcern,
AsthedirectorofPhilosophyDepartment,Iamwritingtoyoutorecommendoneofmybestfriends,Mark.Eros,toyourdistinguisheddepartment.
Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbeinterestedtoknowhisdetailsviathisletter.Firstly,…What’smore….Lastbutnotleast……
Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendhimasanidealcandidateforyourposition.Ifyou
haveanyquestionsconcerninghisbackground,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.
備忘錄/報告（MEMO）：備忘錄在本質上也是書信，一般是寫給同事的一種正式而簡短的信，常常是有關工作事宜等。它的主體部分和書信幾乎一樣，只是省略其中的禮貌結尾。同時，MEMO不需要結束語和簽名。（但結尾可以寫Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.）
寫作格式：
Date:日期如September12,2001
To：收件人
From:發(fā)件人
Subject：事由，如FacultyMeeting
范文：Directions:
Youareanactivememberofthestudentnewspaper.Thenewspaperiscurrentlylookingforajournalistforthesummersemester.Writeamemothatwillappearinthenewspapernextweekdescribingthepositionavailable.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.
提綱分析：沒有具體的提綱要求，中間完全自己發(fā)揮。
P1：寫作目的：招人
P2：具體細節(jié)：展開2-3點。三點最好，每點一句即可�？梢詮囊韵路矫嬲归_：
1）招聘條件2）上班時間3）工作任務4）薪水待遇5）培訓機會Date:August10,2004
To:Allstudents
From:LiMing
Subject:JournalistPositionAvailablefortheSummerSemester
Onbehalfofthestudentsnewspaper,IamwritingthisMEMOtoinformyouthatwearegoingtorecruitanewstaff.Andthedetailsarelistedasfollows.(寫作意圖/寫此MEMO的目的)（2句，30字）
Firstly,Applicantsshouldcurrentlybestudyingattheuniversity,andshouldpreferablyhaveatleasttwoyears’writingexperience.Secondly,thesuccessfulapplicantwillbeexpectedtowritetwoarticleseveryweekonhappeningsinthecityandoncampus.Finally,thepositionwillcommenceattheendofMayandwilllastthroughtotheendofAugust.（3句，59字）
Ifyouareinterested,pleasesendyourresumetothecampusnewspaperoffice.(OR:Ifyouhaveanyquestionsconcerningtheposition/application,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.)（1句，13字）
公告/告示
1.標題(Announcement或者具體活動)放中間
2.寫作日期位于標題下一行，右頂格
3.無須稱呼結尾禮貌語，但可以寫Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.而且要署名，一般是機構，題目會告之
Youruniversity,XinhuaUniversity,isgoingtocelebrateits60thanniversary.Writeanannouncementwhichcoversthefollowinginformation.
1)openingandclosingdatesofthecelebrations,
2)celebrationactivities,
3)aninvitationtoallthepaststudents,and
4)waystocontact.
http://emrowgh.com eXinhuaUniversityattheendoftheannouncement.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(10points)
提綱分析：
P1：公告/活動目的
P2：活動細節(jié)1。時間（提綱1）2。活動（提綱2）（最好自己再發(fā)揮一點）P3：邀請+聯(lián)系（提綱3，4）
Announcement
January19,2016
Amonth-longanniversarycelebrationwillbeheldatXinhuaUniversity,tosaluteits60thanniversary.Andthedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.
Firstly,itwillstart/commencefromSeptember16th,2005andcontinuetoOctober.15th,2005.Secondly,seminars,culturalandathleticsportsactivities,andmanyotherprogramsareplannedtomarkthisgloriousoccasionoftheuniversity.Finally,ourmayorwillbepresenttomakeaspeechtoo.
Hereby（特此，很經(jīng)典）wesincerelyinviteallouralumnitobepresenttosharethesehappiesthoursoftheschool.Ifyouhaveanyquestions, http://emrowgh.com .(OR:Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youaremostwelcometocontactusformoreinformation.)
XinhuaUniversity
總結：不管如何，MEMO和公告的共同點是：
P1：活動/事件目的+Andthedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.
P2：細節(jié)的安排改寫提綱+合理擴展寫三點
P3：問題聯(lián)系方式Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.