這是避免寫錯句子的一種有效的辦法，他是因?yàn)閻畚业腻X才同我結(jié)了婚，這樣既能把意思表達(dá)得更明了又能減少寫錯句子的幾率，從各地來的學(xué)生中有許多是北方人，天氣轉(zhuǎn)晴了這是我們沒有想到的。
英語寫作中句子的表達(dá)
英語寫作中句子的表達(dá)
高考英語書面表達(dá)要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，句式豐富，用詞準(zhǔn)確，行文連貫，思路清晰，過渡自然。要想達(dá)到這一目的，句子的正確運(yùn)用和表達(dá)是至關(guān)重要的。高考書面表達(dá)不僅要求學(xué)生正確運(yùn)用語法規(guī)則，即結(jié)構(gòu)完整，主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，還要有效的使用并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進(jìn)、因果、比較等表達(dá)方式，同時(shí)“運(yùn)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯”進(jìn)行表達(dá)。
［學(xué)習(xí)過程］
一.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)方式
1.簡單句
Earlyinthemorning,wesetoutattheschoolgate.
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.
MuchofCanadaiscoveredbyforests,butinChinatheareaofforestismuchless.
Wecansende-mailsanywhereatanytimeandgetthelatestinformationthroughInternet.
2.復(fù)合句
（1）狀語從句
Thecarhitthemanwhenhewascrossingthestreet.（時(shí)間）
Assoonaswegottothecampsite,westartedtoputupthetentandcookfood.
WhereverIam,Iwillbethinkingofyou.（地點(diǎn)）
Shetooksomebookswithhersothatshewouldgetboredduringthelongjourney.（目的）Aslongaswedon’tloseheart,wewillfindawaytoovercomethedifficulty.（條件）Althoughitisdifficult,wewilltryourbesttofinishitontime.(讓步)
（2）定語從句
YuanLongping,whoisapioneerofagriculture，iscalled“thefatherofrice”.
WechoseBeijingWorldParkasourdestination,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing.
（3）名詞性從句
Wherewearegoingthisweekendhasn’tbeendecided.(主語從句)
Myideaisthatweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan.（表語從句）
Thefactthattheearthisseriouslypollutediswell-known.（同位語從句）
Idon’tknowwhetherTomwillcometothepartytonight（賓語從句）
（4）非謂語動詞
Surroundedbyavarietyofbuildings,wefoundourselvesdeeplyabsorbedinthesight.Welefttheparkfeelingjoyful.
HavinggraduatedfromSouthwestAgricultureCollegein1953,hedevotedtofindingwaystogrowmorerice.
Itisunnecessarytoarguewithhimaboutit.
Thebookexplainshowtosolvetheproblem.
3．固定搭配的結(jié)構(gòu)
Itwasthisparkthatwasfullofhistoryandfun.（強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)）
AsthedestinationislocatedinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,wehadtospendonehourandahalfgettingtherebybus.Uponarrival,wevisitedLincolnMemorial.
WewenttoBeijingWorldPark,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,inordertoseetheworld-famousarchitecture.
YuanLongpingisknownasapioneerofagriculture.
Walkingthroughtheparkwasafeastfortheeyes.
Thewholeworldcouldbenefitfromhiswork.
Hisgreatcontributiontoagricultureisofgreatimportance..
Insteadofbeingsatisfiedwithhiswork,hewasdrivenbyastrongdesiretocontinuetodevelophisrice.
Forhisgreatachievement,hewashonoredbyChinesegovernment.
二.英文寫作中常見錯誤句型分析
1.粘連句
Beijingisabeautifulcity,Ienjoylivinghere.
2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整
Therearemanypeopleagreetokeeppetsathome.
Althoughpetsmaypollutetheenvironment.
3.不平衡結(jié)構(gòu)
Thenewhouseislarge,beautifulandhasenoughroomsforpeopletolivein.
Thereisagreatdifferentbetweendiningoutandtohaveasnackathome.
4.懸空修飾
ComparingwithZhongguancun,SiliconValleyisfarmoredeveloped.
Tofinishthetaskperfectly,morepracticeshouldbedoneahead.
5．漢語式英語
WhowillinsteadofMiGreen?
Weallagainstallkindsofterroristsactivities.
Therewere20peoplediedinthecaraccident.
Don’tworry.Yourbodywillgetwellsoon.
Iwasverygladtohearfromherletter.
Thefilmhadbegunfor5minuteswhenIgottothetheatre.
Thewesternpartofthecityrainedheavilyyesterdayevening.
Ourschoolhavetakenplacegreatchanges.
WelcomeyoutovisitBeijing.
三.寫作中常用的句型結(jié)構(gòu)
1.Heworkedveryhardinordertoachievehisgoal.
2.Havingwalkedthewholeday,weweresotiredthatwecoulddonothingbutsleep.
3.Nomatterwhatproblemhefaces,henevergivesup.
4.Itistoolongajourneytomakeinonedaybycar.
5.You’dbetterstartbyintroducingyourself.
6.Tompreferstostayuplatetofinishtheworkratherthanleaveitdonethenextday.
7.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoises.
8.YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupatheexam.
9.Heissuchaboringmanthathelikesneitherentertainmentnorlearning.
10.Footballaswellascomputergamesispopularwithyoungpeople.
11.Everyoneisbusyintheclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.
12.Beijinghasapopulationof13million,makingitoneofthelargestcitiesinChina.
13.Thedistancefromeasttowestisover5,500kilometersandthecountrycovers6oftheworld’s24timezones.
14.Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathadhappened.
15.Itisnogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.
16.Peoplefinditimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.
17.ItistenyearssinceImethimlasttime.
18.Itwon’tbelongbeforewegraduatefromthisschool.
19.ItisconvenientforustobeabletogetlotsofinformationthroughInternet.
20.Ittookusquitesometimetocollectsomuchinformation.
21.It’stimeforustoleavethepark.
22.Itisfriendshipthatwevaluemost.
23.Itistimethatwedidsomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.
24.Theybelieveittheirdutytohelpthoseinneed.
25.Itissaidthatmorechanceswillbegiventothestudents.
26.ItisknowntoallthatChinaisacountrywithalonghistory.
27.Asisknowntoall,the29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2016.
28.Whatexcitedmemostgreatlywasthatmynovelhadbeenpublished.
29.Thereisabeautifulgirllivinginthesmallvillageatthefootofthemountain.
30.ThereasonwhyIwaslatewasthatIcaughtinthetrafficjamthismorning.
31.Thereusedtobealibrary,butnowithasbeentorndown.
32.Thereisnodoubtwhetherheisfitforthejob.
33.Tomygreatsurprise,hemanagedtocompletethetaskonlyinacoupleofdays.
34.Ihadarolloffilmdevelopedlastweek.
35.Thankstoourefforts,everythingisgoingsmoothly.
36.I’mnotsurewhenIsawherlast.
37.Butfortherain,weshouldhavehadapleasantjourney.
38.Iwasabouttogooutwhenthetelephonerang.
39.Somepeoplewastefoodwhileothersdon’thaveenough.
40.Hewassotiredthathefellasleepwithhisshoeson.
41.Onceyouarehere,listentoyourteacher’sinstructions.
42.ThepopulationinandaroundSanFranciscoisnowtentimesmorethanitwasin1906.
43.ThemoreyoupracticeEnglish,theeasieritbecomes.
44.TheChinesedietisconsideredtobethehealthiestintheworld.
http://emrowgh.com lephonesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.
46.Besideshisworkinphysics,hespentalotoftimeworkingforhumanrightsandprogress.
47.Insteadofgoingtothebank,theywilluseacomputerandatelephonetochangemoneyandtopaytheirelectricitybillsandsoon.
48.Thatisbecausethisprofessorhasdiseasewhichpreventshimfromspeaking.
49.Althoughmanyfamiliesbecameseparated,peoplestillkeptintouchwitheachother.
50.ChinaDailyhasallusualsectionsofnewspaper,includingHomeNews,InternationalNews,BusineNewsandSportsnews.
英語寫作中句子的構(gòu)思表達(dá)
一、代入法
這是進(jìn)行英語寫作時(shí)最常用的方法。同學(xué)們在掌握一定的詞匯和短語之后，結(jié)合一定的語法知識，按照句子的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)，直接用英語代入相應(yīng)的句式即可。如：
◎他從不承認(rèn)自己的失敗。
Heneveradmitshisfailure.
◎那項(xiàng)比賽吸引了大批觀眾。
Thematchattractedalargecrowd.
◎他把蛋糕分成4塊。
Hedividedthecakeintofourpieces.
二、還原法
即把疑問句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等還原成基本結(jié)構(gòu)。這是避免寫錯句子的一種有效的辦法。如：
◎這是開往格拉斯哥的火車嗎?
IsthisthetrainforGlasgow?
還原為陳述句：ThisisthetrainforGlasgow.
◎他是因?yàn)閻畚业腻X才同我結(jié)了婚。
Itwasbecausehelovedmymoneythathemarriedme.
還原為非強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Becausehelovedmymoney,hemarriedme.
◎光速很快，我們幾乎沒法想像它的速度。
Sofastdoeslighttravelthatwecanhardlyimagineitsspeed.
還原為正常語序：Lighttravelssofastthatwecanhardlyimagineitsspeed.
三、分解法
就是把一個句子分成兩個或兩個以上的句子。這樣既能把意思表達(dá)得更明了，又能減少寫錯句子的幾率。如：
◎我們要干就要干好。
Ifwedoathing,weshoulddoitwell.
◎從各地來的學(xué)生中有許多是北方人。
Therearestudentsherefromalloverthecountry.ManyofthemarefromtheNorth.
四、合并法
就是把兩個或兩個以上的簡單句用一個復(fù)合句或較復(fù)雜的簡單句表達(dá)出來。這種方法最能體現(xiàn)學(xué)生的英語表達(dá)能力，同時(shí)也最能提高文章的可讀性。如：
◎我們迷路了，這使我們的野營旅行變成了一次冒險(xiǎn)。
Ourcampingtripturnedintoanadventurewhenwegotlost.
◎天氣轉(zhuǎn)晴了，這是我們沒有想到的。
Theweatherturnedouttobeverygood,whichwasmorethanwecouldexpect.
◎狼是高度群體化的動物，它們的成功依賴于合作。
Wolvesarehighlysocialanimalswhosesuccedependsupontheircooperation.
五、刪減法
就是在寫英語句子時(shí)，把相應(yīng)漢語句子里的某些詞、短語或重復(fù)的成分刪掉或省略。如：
◎這部打字機(jī)真是價(jià)廉物美。
Thistypewriterisverycheapandfineindeed.
注：漢語表達(dá)中的“價(jià)”和“物”在英語中均無需譯出。
◎個子不高不是人生中的嚴(yán)重缺陷。
Notbeingtallisnotaseriousdisadvantageinlife，
注：漢語說“個子不高”，其實(shí)就是“不高”。也就是說，其中的“個子”在英語中無需譯出。
六、移位法
由于英語和漢語在表達(dá)習(xí)慣上存在差異，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，某些成分需要前置或后移。如：
◎他發(fā)現(xiàn)賺點(diǎn)外快很容易。
Hefounditeasytoearnextramoney.
注：it在此為形式賓語，真正的賓語是句末的不定式toearnextramoney。
◎告訴我這事的人不肯告訴我他的名字。
Themanwhotoldmethisrefusedtotellmehisname.
注：whotoldmethis為修飾theman的定語從句，應(yīng)置于其后。
◎直到我遇到你以后，我才真正體會到幸福。
ItwasnotuntilImetyouthatIknewrealhappiness.
注：notuntil為英語中的固定句式，其意為“直到才”。
七、分析法
指根據(jù)要表示的漢語意思，通過進(jìn)行語法分析和句式判斷，然后寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的英語句子。如：
◎從這個角度看，問題并不像人們一般料想的那樣嚴(yán)重。Seeninthislight,thematterisnotasseriousaspeoplegenerallysuppose.
注：分詞短語作狀語時(shí)，其邏輯主語應(yīng)與句子主語一致，由于thematter與sec之間為被動關(guān)系，故see要用過去分詞seen。
◎我沒有見過他，所以說不出他的模樣。
Nothavingmethim,Icannottellyouwhatheislike.
注：如果分詞的動作發(fā)生在謂語動作之前，且與邏輯主語是主動關(guān)系，則用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式。
八、意譯法
有的同學(xué)在寫句子時(shí)，一遇見生詞或不熟悉的表達(dá)，就以為是“山窮水頸了。其實(shí)，此時(shí)我們可以設(shè)法繞開難點(diǎn)，在保持原意的基礎(chǔ)上，用不同的表達(dá)方式寫出來。如：
◎湯姆一直在擾亂別的孩子，我就把他攆了出去。Tomwasupsettingtheotherchildren,soIshowedhimthedoor.◎有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.◎你可以同我們一起去或是呆在家中，悉聽尊便。Youcangowithusorstayathome,whicheveryouchoose.
2016高考英語寫作講解與訓(xùn)練--作文寫作基礎(chǔ)(寫作中句子的表達(dá))
高考英語作文寫作基椽—英語寫作中句子的表達(dá)
一.教學(xué)內(nèi)容：
英語寫作中句子的表達(dá)
高考英語書面表達(dá)要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，句式豐富，用詞準(zhǔn)確，行文連貫，思路清晰，過渡自然。要想達(dá)到這一目的，句子的正確運(yùn)用和表達(dá)是至關(guān)重要的。高考書面表達(dá)不僅要求學(xué)生正確運(yùn)用語法規(guī)則，即結(jié)構(gòu)完整，主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，還要有效的使用并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進(jìn)、因果、比較等表達(dá)方式，同時(shí)“運(yùn)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯”進(jìn)行表達(dá)。
［學(xué)習(xí)過程］
一.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)方式
1.簡單句
Earlyinthemorning,wesetoutattheschoolgate.
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.
MuchofCanadaiscoveredbyforests,butinChinatheareaofforestismuchless.
Wecansende-mailsanywhereatanytimeandgetthelatestinformationthroughInternet.
2.復(fù)合句
（1）狀語從句
Thecarhitthemanwhenhewascrossingthestreet.（時(shí)間）
Assoonaswegottothecampsite,westartedtoputupthetentandcookfood.
WhereverIam,Iwillbethinkingofyou.（地點(diǎn)）
Shetooksomebookswithhersothatshewouldgetboredduringthelongjourney.（目的）Aslongaswedon’tloseheart,wewillfindawaytoovercomethedifficulty.（條件）Althoughitisdifficult,wewilltryourbesttofinishitontime.(讓步)
（2）定語從句
YuanLongping,whoisapioneerofagriculture，iscalled“thefatherofrice”.
WechoseBeijingWorldParkasourdestination,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing.
（3）名詞性從句
Wherewearegoingthisweekendhasn’tbeendecided.(主語從句)
Myideaisthatweshouldsticktoouroriginalplan.（表語從句）
Thefactthattheearthisseriouslypollutediswell-known.（同位語從句）
Idon’tknowwhetherTomwillcometothepartytonight（賓語從句）
（4）非謂語動詞
Surroundedbyavarietyofbuildings,wefoundourselvesdeeplyabsorbedinthesight.
Welefttheparkfeelingjoyful.
HavinggraduatedfromSouthwestAgricultureCollegein1953,hedevotedtofindingwaystogrowmorerice.
Itisunnecessarytoarguewithhimaboutit.
Thebookexplainshowtosolvetheproblem.
3．固定搭配的結(jié)構(gòu)
Itwasthisparkthatwasfullofhistoryandfun.（強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)）
AsthedestinationislocatedinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,wehadtospendonehourandahalfgettingtherebybus.Uponarrival,wevisitedLincolnMemorial.
WewenttoBeijingWorldPark,whichliesinFengtaiinthesouthwestofBeijing,inordertoseetheworld-famousarchitecture.
YuanLongpingisknownasapioneerofagriculture.
Walkingthroughtheparkwasafeastfortheeyes.
Thewholeworldcouldbenefitfromhiswork.
Hisgreatcontributiontoagricultureisofgreatimportance..
Insteadofbeingsatisfiedwithhiswork,hewasdrivenbyastrongdesiretocontinuetodevelophisrice.
Forhisgreatachievement,hewashonoredbyChinesegovernment.
二.英文寫作中常見錯誤句型分析
1.粘連句
Beijingisabeautifulcity,Ienjoylivinghere.
2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整
Therearemanypeopleagreetokeeppetsathome.
Althoughpetsmaypollutetheenvironment.
3.不平衡結(jié)構(gòu)
Thenewhouseislarge,beautifulandhasenoughroomsforpeopletolivein.
Thereisagreatdifferentbetweendiningoutandtohaveasnackathome.
4.懸空修飾
ComparingwithZhongguancun,SiliconValleyisfarmoredeveloped.
Tofinishthetaskperfectly,morepracticeshouldbedoneahead.
5．漢語式英語
WhowillinsteadofMiGreen?
Weallagainstallkindsofterroristsactivities.
Therewere20peoplediedinthecaraccident.
Don’tworry.Yourbodywillgetwellsoon.
Iwasverygladtohearfromherletter.
Thefilmhadbegunfor5minuteswhenIgottothetheatre.
Thewesternpartofthecityrainedheavilyyesterdayevening.
Ourschoolhavetakenplacegreatchanges.
WelcomeyoutovisitBeijing.
三.寫作中常用的句型結(jié)構(gòu)
1.Heworkedveryhardinordertoachievehisgoal.
2.Havingwalkedthewholeday,weweresotiredthatwecoulddonothingbutsleep.
3.Nomatterwhatproblemhefaces,henevergivesup.
4.Itistoolongajourneytomakeinonedaybycar.
5.You’dbetterstartbyintroducingyourself.
6.Tompreferstostayuplatetofinishtheworkratherthanleaveitdonethenextday.
7.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoises.
8.YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupatheexam.
9.Heissuchaboringmanthathelikesneitherentertainmentnorlearning.
10.Footballaswellascomputergamesispopularwithyoungpeople.
11.Everyoneisbusyintheclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.
12.Beijinghasapopulationof13million,makingitoneofthelargestcitiesinChina.
13.Thedistancefromeasttowestisover5,500kilometersandthecountrycovers6oftheworld’s24timezones.
14.Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathadhappened.
15.Itisnogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.
16.Peoplefinditimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.
17.ItistenyearssinceImethimlasttime.
18.Itwon’tbelongbeforewegraduatefromthisschool.
19.ItisconvenientforustobeabletogetlotsofinformationthroughInternet.
20.Ittookusquitesometimetocollectsomuchinformation.
21.It’stimeforustoleavethepark.
22.Itisfriendshipthatwevaluemost.
23.Itistimethatwedidsomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.
24.Theybelieveittheirdutytohelpthoseinneed.
25.Itissaidthatmorechanceswillbegiventothestudents.
26.ItisknowntoallthatChinaisacountrywithalonghistory.
27.Asisknowntoall,the29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingin2016.
28.Whatexcitedmemostgreatlywasthatmynovelhadbeenpublished.
29.Thereisabeautifulgirllivinginthesmallvillageatthefootofthemountain.
30.ThereasonwhyIwaslatewasthatIcaughtinthetrafficjamthismorning.
31.Thereusedtobealibrary,butnowithasbeentorndown.
32.Thereisnodoubtwhetherheisfitforthejob.
33.Tomygreatsurprise,hemanagedtocompletethetaskonlyinacoupleofdays.
34.Ihadarolloffilmdevelopedlastweek.
35.Thankstoourefforts,everythingisgoingsmoothly.
36.I’mnotsurewhenIsawherlast.
37.Butfortherain,weshouldhavehadapleasantjourney.
38.Iwasabouttogooutwhenthetelephonerang.
39.Somepeoplewastefoodwhileothersdon’thaveenough.
40.Hewassotiredthathefellasleepwithhisshoeson.
41.Onceyouarehere,listentoyourteacher’sinstructions.
42.ThepopulationinandaroundSanFranciscoisnowtentimesmorethanitwasin1906.
43.ThemoreyoupracticeEnglish,theeasieritbecomes.
44.TheChinesedietisconsideredtobethehealthiestintheworld.
http://emrowgh.com lephonesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.
46.Besideshisworkinphysics,hespentalotoftimeworkingforhumanrightsandprogress.
47.Insteadofgoingtothebank,theywilluseacomputerandatelephonetochangemoneyandtopaytheirelectricitybillsandsoon.
48.Thatisbecausethisprofessorhasdiseasewhichpreventshimfromspeaking.
49.Althoughmanyfamiliesbecameseparated,peoplestillkeptintouchwitheachother.
50.ChinaDailyhasallusualsectionsofnewspaper,includingHomeNews,InternationalNews,BusineNewsandSportsnews.