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2015年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文：誤導(dǎo)信息
【參考范文一】
The cartoon, vivid and explicit, unfolds a sense to us, in which a woman, who stands by the door, makes a cup of coffee for her husband. However, the most striking feature of the drawing is that the husband, working in front of a computer, says that he feels unfortunate to live in a world with so much misleading information. Simple as the illustration seems, it discloses a serious problem that it is rather hard to obtain useful and helpful information in the highly modernized society.
Harmful are the impacts of the phenomenon and I would like to explore the following aspects. For one thing, by no means can we deny that nothing poses a greater threat to a corporation's strategy of development than the misleading information, the harm of which can never be ignored. For another, this kind of cheat also makes it impossible for individuals, especially adolescents, to tell the right from the wrong.
From my perspective, it is high time that the authorities concerned established relevant regulations to better the environment of the virtual world. Only in this way can both people and our country benefit a lot from the development of high technology.
【參考范文二】
It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.
Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn’t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between individuals and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.
To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while individuals need to judge independently. Only when they work hand in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
題干中明確標(biāo)出同學(xué)們需要focus on the harm caused by misleading information online，所以同學(xué)們這篇文章重點(diǎn)就應(yīng)該放在harm危害這個(gè)詞上面。
范文中，開篇以社會(huì)現(xiàn)象引入到主題詞misleading information誤導(dǎo)信息的出現(xiàn);之后第二段開始重點(diǎn)討論誤導(dǎo)信息的嚴(yán)重危害。內(nèi)容層層遞進(jìn)，從謠言使一些人做出沖動(dòng)行為，推進(jìn)到若不治理將會(huì)產(chǎn)生對(duì)于政府信任危機(jī)。并且段落最后用日本核輻射導(dǎo)致國(guó)內(nèi)搶鹽事件的舉例進(jìn)一步證明了謠言的危害。中間段緊扣主題。
文章結(jié)尾部分采用建議式的結(jié)尾方式，提出了針對(duì)之前提出的危害的解決措施，從政府到個(gè)人都有對(duì)應(yīng)的建議。這也更加緊扣之前第二段所提到的內(nèi)容。最后一句運(yùn)用押韻的手法(hand in hand對(duì)應(yīng)to the end)將文章帶入收尾。最后一段的目的在于使得文章從單純的列舉誤導(dǎo)信息的危害加入了作者自己對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的思考，也讓文章的內(nèi)容更加完整。
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