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tobacco production and consumption
we meet smokers almost everywhere , in the st reet , in shops , at the railway station , on the camp us and in many other public a reas . t his explains the astonis hing sta tistic figure of 1. 1 billion smokers out of 5. 6 billion people in the world , occupying about 20% of the world’s population .
the ha rmful effect that smoking has upon people mainly lies in two aspects : money los s and health deterioration . in the figure , we can see that the annual consumption of tobacco amounts to 200 billion dollars , which , if spent on public welfare , can benefit a great many poor people .
it is known to all that smoking does a lot of ha rm, not only to smokers themselves , but also to people a round who are actually unconscious victims . according to the statistics obtained , approxima tely 3 million people die of lung cance r and other fat al diseases every year .
for tunately , nowadays more and more people have become awa re of the harmful effect of smoking . tobacco consumption is decr easing . tobacco production is decreasing ( has dropped to 14 .2 billion pounds in 1995 as against 14 .364 billion pounds in 1994 ) . the numbe r of smokers is decreasing . finally , we believe in the advance of society , we believe in a new world without smoking , we believe in people .
結(jié)構(gòu)分析:
· pictur e 2———吸煙者到處可見(jiàn)
煙民占世界人口⋯⋯
· pictur e 3———吸煙既費(fèi)錢又損健康
每年煙草耗去⋯⋯
· pictur e 4———吸煙導(dǎo)致疾病的死亡
· pictur e 1———意識(shí)到吸煙危害導(dǎo)致煙草生產(chǎn)下降, 消耗
下降, 煙民人數(shù)下降
內(nèi)容分析:
本文是一篇圖畫圖表作文, 要求說(shuō)明并解釋每一張小圖, 最后指出煙草生產(chǎn)和消耗的趨勢(shì)。本文的寫作要用到多種文體。寫作前必須仔細(xì)看圖, 作出分析才能寫得層次分明, 覆蓋四幅小圖。本題曾是一道考研寫作題, 作者借題發(fā)揮, 撰文供學(xué)習(xí)。
萬(wàn)能句型:
public a reas 公共場(chǎng)所
astonishing statistic figure 驚人的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字
occupy v . 占
have an effect on 對(duì)⋯⋯有影響
lie in 在于
money loss and health deterioration 又費(fèi)錢又損健康
cons umption n . 消耗
tobacco n . 煙草
amount to 達(dá)
public welfare 公共福利
unconscious victims 不知不覺(jué)的受害者, 被動(dòng)吸煙者
lung cancer 肺癌
fatal disease 致命疾病
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