2016雅思寫作高分結(jié)尾

　　想出國留學(xué)，雅思考試是烤鴨必經(jīng)之路，如何在這條路上走的好，走的通常是每一個烤鴨人都想知道的答案!下面我們就重點(diǎn)來說說，雅思考試之中，我們需要注意的一些問題。

　　一個漂亮而又簡潔的結(jié)尾對于高分大作文來說無疑是必須的，盡管最終評分的主要依據(jù)并不是由結(jié)尾段決定的，但是結(jié)尾段的出色完成對于一篇成功的學(xué)術(shù)類大作文是不可或缺的。在本章節(jié)中，老師將帶領(lǐng)大家領(lǐng)略結(jié)尾的不同高端寫法。

　　回顧全文+觀點(diǎn)+展望：

　　這種結(jié)尾方式比較適合于雙邊結(jié)構(gòu)的作文，在這種寫法中，我們要注意的是結(jié)尾段由三個要素組成，其中第2個要素是必須的 ，但是句子的數(shù)量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1個句子。首先我們來看一個例子：

　　I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。

　　上面這個例句中，作者將自己的觀點(diǎn)隱藏在了一個賓語從句之后，起到了一個欲揚(yáng)先抑的效果。但是這種效果必須搭配一個展望未來才能起到渲染的效果。我們來對比另外一個例子：

　　In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。

　　大家不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，2個句子都使用了相似的銜接方式，即首句委婉地回顧全文，將觀點(diǎn)的對立面用"讓步"的方式表達(dá)出來，同時也是對于主體段觀點(diǎn)的回顧。然后再是用轉(zhuǎn)折闡述自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)。最后再用一個對于未來的期望來支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。這種順序安排的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于對于文章的主體有很好的總結(jié)，但同時觀點(diǎn)又是非常鮮明有力的，加上對于未來的潤色，使得表達(dá)更流暢。用同樣的方法，我們再來看第三個例句：

　　To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。

　　和前2個結(jié)尾不同，第三個結(jié)尾盡管也是先回顧了全文，但是它將作者的觀點(diǎn)和對未來的期望寫在了一個條件狀語從句里。如此就給出了我們在構(gòu)造"展望未來"時的一個思路，即搭配條件狀語從句或者介賓短語跟在觀點(diǎn)句之后。此種結(jié)尾發(fā)展方式同樣適用于分析解決型大作文的結(jié)尾段布局，比如：

　　All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。

　　對于毒品對社會的危害，作者先是承認(rèn)現(xiàn)狀的無法改變，進(jìn)而樂觀地闡述了自己的觀點(diǎn)即采取了切實(shí)有效的行動后可以減弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性來對未來作展望。換句話說，在社會類分析解決型議論文中，我們在展望未來時可以考慮用強(qiáng)調(diào)其長遠(yuǎn)的影響作為突破口。又如：

　　In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country。

　　拓展閱讀：2016雅思考試寫作范文精選

　　With the development of science and technology, the cars have already become the important component in our daily life gradually. Cars make our life convenient and swift. However, too many cars have caused very serious social problems. Some people claim that the disadvantages of car are more than the advantages. I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis.

　　Since one century [ago], the auto industry has [been] developed at full speed worldwide, and has brought the enormous progresses to our life. For example, the car is the most convenient tool of transportation. We can [be] on and off duty by car every day, we can go to travel by car on the vacation, we can utilize the cars to deal with some emergency too. The car [is] playing an important role in our daily life. They make our rhythm of life faster and faster, make our business become more and more efficient.

　　On the other hand, the development of the automobile has brought a lot of infant industry to people, Give people countless employment opportunities too. Such as, manufacturing industry, repairing industry and maintaining industry. We are enjoying the convenience that the cars bring to us; at the same time we can utilize the auto industry to support ourselves.However, we can not ignore that too many cars cause enormous social problems, for example, traffic jam, air pollution, traffic accident, to which we have to find a solution.

　　In a word, the cars have brought enormous change to our life; the advantages are far more than the disadvantages. We should recognize the merit of the cars, and do our best to solve the problems. If so, our life will be brighter.

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