2016托福寫作結(jié)尾段構(gòu)思思路

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　　一、重申立場

　　“It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life。”

　　In conclusion， given the growing demands of career on today’s professionals， a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter， by setting priorities， and by making suitable career choices。

　　二、重申立場+總結(jié)理由

　　“Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society， schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities。”

　　In conclusion， schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science， as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover， disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction。

　　三、讓步+重申立場

　　“Job security and salary should be based on employee performance， not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity。”

　　In the final analysis， the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However， the statement goes too far， it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and， in the end， productivity， but also is required by fairness。

　　四、重申立場+引申擴(kuò)展

　　How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not， what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?

　　In conclusion， supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates， and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful， and probably more effective overall， to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear， honest and supportive feedback.

　　拓展閱讀：新托福寫作素材：家長影響

　　Children are prone to observe and follow their parents’ behaviors. For example, a child who sees his/her father exercising regularly will probably be active as an adult. Other positive behaviors demonstrated by parents could affect their children in various ways, including their dressing style, dental hygiene and table manners. On the contrary, children of smokers are more likely to pick up the habit of smoking because of parental modeling and because they have increased access to cigarettes. According to a recent survey conducted by the Kentucky Department for Public Health, a child of an alcoholic parent is four times more likely to become an alcoholic when he/she becomes an adult. In the cases above, the influences of parental modeling should never be underestimated with regards to how these actions affect their children.

　　托福寫作舉一反三：

　　① affect 影響

　　=influence, impact

　　✎ The children and spouse of a smoker will be adversely affected by the constant smoke in their environment.

　　② underestimate 低估

　　=underrate

　　✎ Children always look to their mother for guidance, and therefore the influence that a mother has over a child could never be underestimated.

　　✎ Under no circumstances should we underestimate the importance of helping students obtain a thorough understanding of what has been printed in their textbooks.

　　✎ 反義詞：overestimate

　　-托福寫作話題詞匯-

　　家族紐帶 family tie

　　親情 family bond

　　代溝 generation gap

　　家庭觀念 family value

　　核心家庭 nuclear family

　　父母指導(dǎo) parental guidance

　　相互理解 mutual understanding

　　尊重父母 respect one’s parents

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