2017年中考英語寫作范文以及點評

　　面對即將到來的中考，很多考生對英語寫作還是心里沒底。這里小編特地送上實用的中考英語寫作范文，并附以點評，希望對大家有所幫助。

　　2017年中考英語寫作范文以及點評：

　　2017年中考英語寫作范文1

　　Why Are Trees Important?

　　Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

　　Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.

　　Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.

　　點評：文章先闡明論點，接著論證，最后重申自己的觀點。

　　2017年中考英語寫作范文2

　　It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

　　It's our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it. Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

　　點評：作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確，還鞏固了所學的知識，并且注意句型的多樣化，如長句，短句，疑問句，使用了“if，so, now, but”等詞，整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上，寫文章就像串珠子，連接詞就在于把一個個單詞串起來。

　　現(xiàn)在，根據(jù)以上的范文和點評，我們可以總結出以下的'觀點：

　　議論文要有自己的觀點，要有論證過程，強調觀點。常用的句型如：

　　1. 論點

　　Computer is important.

　　We must learn English well.

　　It's very important for us to...

　　In my opinion...

　　2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢，緊湊。如：

　　Firstly...Secondly…，Lastly ... Above all等

　　3.結尾強調觀點，最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點，如：

　　So we must...

　　So it's very important for us to...

　　I believe...

　　We should...

　　2017年中考英語寫作范文：

　　Directions： For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like? You should write no less than 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：

　　1. 有的`人喜歡參加旅行社旅游(package tours)

　　2. 有的人喜歡自己獨立行動(travelling on one‘s own)

　　3. 比較這兩種旅游方式，我喜歡的是……

　　范文：

　　With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter， more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours fro convenience， I prefer to travel on my own.

　　I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Travelling on my own， I’m my own boss; and can decide when to start on my way， where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary， in a package tour you‘re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle， you have to jump up from a sound sleep and， with heavy-lidded eyes，， hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach. At the sight of the little flag waving， you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule， regardless of the weather or your health condition.

　　True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel inpidually，for instance， getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

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