雅思小作文線形圖技巧

　　相信很多參加過(guò)雅思考試的學(xué)員都會(huì)認(rèn)為小作文要比大作文要難寫(xiě)，認(rèn)為小作文很難寫(xiě)得出彩。根據(jù)多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，主要原因是他們的句型都過(guò)于單一。其實(shí)要想讓小作文寫(xiě)得好，也并非就是一件很難的事情。今天小編就來(lái)教大家一個(gè)幫助大家提高折線圖表達(dá)的技巧。

　　在介紹技巧之前，請(qǐng)大家對(duì)比一下關(guān)于描述電視機(jī)觀眾人數(shù)變化的一個(gè)折線圖5.5分的考生例文和6.5分高分范文的節(jié)選片段。

　　5.5分考生例文：

　　at 6 a.m., the proportion of TV viewers was much lower than that of radio listeners, with only 2%. After that, it increased with fluctuation and overtook that of radio listeners at 12.40, with 15%. Then it continued to ascend until it reached a peak at 45% at 8 p.m., when it started to drop, before it levelled off between 2 a.m. and 5 a.m.

　　6.5分高分范文：

　　At 6 a.m., the percentage of TV viewers was only 2%. during the next 8 hours, it showed a gradual upward trend and outnumbered the figure of radio listeners. Then, it rose continuously and peaked at 45% at 8p.m.. After there was a considerable decline until 2 a.m. in the next morning, it levelled off at 2% in the last few hours.

　　對(duì)比了兩篇文章之后，我們很容易發(fā)現(xiàn)考生例文中，整個(gè)文章句型基本上都是主謂賓句型，盡管這位學(xué)員注意到了詞匯的多樣性。而高分范文同時(shí)具備了句型和詞匯的多樣性。因此這說(shuō)明了，如果想獲得6分或者以上的寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù)，要注意詞匯和句型的豐富性。

　　那么我們一共有哪些不同的句型呢？小編一共羅列了以下五種不同的句型，包括：1.the number of TV viewers rose/increased/ascended/grew/ jumped/ climbed/ soared/ shot up/ showed upward trend between...and...2.The number of TV viewers showed an upward trennd bewteen...and...3.there was a rise/increase/growth in the figure of TV viewers from...to...4.a rise was seen/showed in the number of TV viewers from…to…5.the period between 6 and 9 witnessed/experienced/saw a rise in the figure of TV viewers between… and…

　　我相信這五種句型都是大家所熟知的，而且大家應(yīng)該都能夠正確地組織成完整的'句子。所以如果能夠加以意識(shí)性地運(yùn)用到我們的折線圖的創(chuàng)作中去，就會(huì)讓整個(gè)文章看起來(lái)豐富了很多，再結(jié)合一下同義詞的替換使用，相信一定會(huì)給大家的寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù)加分不少。

　　當(dāng)然，要想寫(xiě)作拿高分，要注意檢查自己文章以確保整篇文章中不存在任何語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。一旦存在這些失誤，會(huì)給考官不好的印象，分?jǐn)?shù)自然就上不去。

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