雅思避免官腔作文
雅思大作文考的是議論文,即考查考生是否能夠在相對(duì)較短的時(shí)間內(nèi)搜集論據(jù),具體地論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。但受國(guó)內(nèi)教育體制的影響,中國(guó)考生往往缺乏對(duì)這些社會(huì)話題的.深刻思考和討論,造成思考模式的僵化與狹隘,因而論證非常空洞、缺乏說服力,寫的太官腔。
那么,應(yīng)該如何對(duì)大作文進(jìn)行有力的論證呢?最常用的方式就是解釋和例證,幾乎在每一篇雅思大作文中,都可以看見這兩種論證方法的身影。
下面關(guān)于work at home or study at home的一段例證:
IBM, one of the business giants, has saved nearly 70 million US dollars in its northeastern region by promoting telecommuting, which has been a driving force to other enterprises to convert their normal working staff into telecommuters. Companies in Japan are one of them and plan to launch the scheme in 2009, which, in turn, spiritually wins more supports from the existing employees, and attracts new hires. 這段話中的2個(gè)例子都較好地完成了若員工選擇在家上班,會(huì)對(duì)公司帶來積極的作用這一證明。
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