靈活運(yùn)用第句和第句根據(jù)不同模板自由組合,開頭段先講重要性然后轉(zhuǎn)講爭論,可以給我們枯燥的生活帶來色彩,對于想過一種有意義的人來說抽空學(xué)習(xí)一門新技術(shù)很重要,寫作技巧句子的可讀性無比重要。
寫作6個重要句子)
6級作文模板:
1)先背3個句子
1Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvanced…….,moreandmore…..arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.(講重要性)
2Thepopularityofdigital…willhavegreatinfluenceonourwork,studyandeverydaylife.Ontheonehand…,Butontheotherhand.(講影響)
3Toconclude,…..arejustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemayhaveletroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuseofthem,alwaysbeingthemasterofthem.(結(jié)尾段)
Ps:靈活運(yùn)用第1句和第2句,根據(jù)不同模板自由組合。
2)模板(2個模板)
1開頭段:先講重要性,然后轉(zhuǎn)講不好的地方。
中間段:措施
結(jié)尾段:先來個小轉(zhuǎn)折再進(jìn)入總結(jié)
開頭段Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvanced…….,moreandmore…..arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.However,whatworriesmostofusisthat……
中間段Firstly….Secondly…..Lastlybutinnomeansleast……
結(jié)尾段Toconclude,…..arejustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemayhaveletroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuseofthem,alwaysbeingthemasterofthem.
2開頭段:先講重要性,然后轉(zhuǎn)講爭論
中間段:轉(zhuǎn)折(即列出兩種不同人的觀點)
結(jié)尾段:直接進(jìn)入總結(jié)(即你的觀點)
開頭段:Itisacceptedthat….Playsasignificantpartforboth…,andwhat’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntothechangeof…..However,whether…deservessuchanattention,people’sideasvary.
中間段:Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthat…..
Ontheotherhand,agreatmanypeopleinsistthat….
結(jié)尾段:Frommyperspective,however….(你的觀點).Therefore,it’stimethat(措施之類的)
6級作文萬能句子(補(bǔ)充在”…..”里面的萬能句子,自己琢磨每個句子放在哪里比較適合)重點背:1)5)6)7)句子,最好全部都被過一遍,自己琢磨怎么用。
1)Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyable,thatistosay,sthcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.。。。能讓我們的生活更美好,也就是說,。。?梢越o我們枯燥的生活帶來色彩
2)Forthemajorityofpeople,readingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethefocusoftheirlivesandthesourceoftheirhappineandcontentment對于很多人來說,學(xué)習(xí)一門新技術(shù)占據(jù)了他們的生活和充實了他們的生活。
3)。。。。。,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom.。。。占據(jù)了某人大部分時間,使得某人沒空想東想西(充實了某人生活)
4)What'ssavethemagreatdealoftimesotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.住校為學(xué)生省去了不少時間,這樣學(xué)生可以把更多的時間用在學(xué)習(xí)上
5)Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.
一點一滴,這樣做可以豐富我們的知識和拓寬我們的視野
6)Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyle,itisimportanttofindtimetolearncertainnewknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes:itisnevertoolatetolearn.對于想過一種有意義的人來說,抽空學(xué)習(xí)一門新技術(shù)很重要
7)Themajorityofstudentsbelievewillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.兼職可以讓學(xué)生們學(xué)習(xí)個人技巧,這樣可以在找工作時更有競爭力
8)Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-job,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.學(xué)生不僅可以提高學(xué)習(xí)成績,還可以獲得在課本上學(xué)不到的工作經(jīng)驗
9)Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsandknowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.
10)1Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson…inmorethanoneway.什么東西可帶來好影響
2Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…什么東西可帶來不好的影響
SAT寫作技巧:句子的可讀性無比重要
SAT寫作技巧:句子的可讀性無比重要
很多學(xué)生在練習(xí)英文作文時,認(rèn)為長句、難句或復(fù)雜句能夠提升文章的語言質(zhì)量,展示自己“深厚”的語言功底,并因此獲得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。他們在備考復(fù)習(xí)時也花了很多精力在長句的練習(xí)上,考試時也會盡量使用長句。這種想法確實有一定的道理,因為很多考試如新托福的寫作科目評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中確實有從語法或用詞的多樣性等角度考察語言質(zhì)量的評分項目,考生如果能夠熟練地運(yùn)用各種句式寫出精彩的長句,確實能給文章增色不少。
然而一味地追求句子的長度有時反而會犧牲句子的“可讀性”,特別是對一些基礎(chǔ)一般的學(xué)生來說,有時生硬地追求長句反而破壞了句子的句法準(zhǔn)確性。下面整理了一些例子,讓大家來體會一些寫得并不成功的長句和如何修改的建議:
建議一:避免空洞的單詞和詞組
1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息,完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子:
Whenallthingsareconsidered,youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents,inmyopinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的“whenallthingsareconsidered”和“inmyopinion”都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為:Youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthantheirparents.
2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換,例如:
Duetothefactthatourgrandparentswereunderanobligationtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehaveatthispointintime.
“duetothefactthat”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達(dá)方式:
Becauseourgrandparentswereobligatedtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehavenow.
建議二:避免重復(fù)
1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯。或者有的時候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù),但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子:
Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslargeinsize.
Large對一個farm來說就是size方面的large,所以insize可以去掉,改為:Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslarge.
更簡潔的表達(dá)方式為:Mygrandfathergrewuponalargefarm.
2.有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換,例如:
Mygrandfatherhassaidoverandoveragainthathehadtoworkonhisparents'farm.
這里的overandoveragain就可以改為repeatedly,顯得更為簡潔:
Mygrandfatherhassaidrepeatedlythathehadtoworkonhisparents'farm.
建議三:選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法結(jié)構(gòu)
選擇合適的語法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也很重要,但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語法結(jié)構(gòu)時可以參考的原則:
1.一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:
Thesituationthatresultedinmygrandfather'snotbeingabletostudyengineeringwasthathisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
從意思上來分析,上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather'snotbeingabletostudy”,而在表達(dá)這個概念時,原句用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點概念,可以改為下面這句話:Mygrandfathercouldn'tstudyengineeringbecausehisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
2.避免頻繁使用“therebe”結(jié)構(gòu),例如下面的句子:
Therewere25cowsonthefarmthatmygrandfatherhadtomilkeveryday.Itwashardworkformygrandfather.
可以改為:Mygrandfatherworkedhard.Hehadtomilk25cowsonthefarmeveryday.更簡潔的句式為:Mygrandfatherworkedhardmilking25cowsdaily.
3.把從句改為短語或單詞。例如:
Dairycowswereraisedonthefarm,whichwaslocated100kilometersfromthenearestuniversityandwasinanareathatwasremote.
簡介的表達(dá)方式為:Thedairyfarmwaslocatedinaremotearea,100kilometerstothenearestuniversity.
4.僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語而不是主語的時候,才使用被動語態(tài)。例如:
Inthefall,notonlydidthecowshavetobemilked,butalsothehaywasmowedandstackedbymygrandfather'sfamily.
本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather'sfamily”,而使用了被動語態(tài)后,仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動語態(tài),相對來說更簡潔一些:Inthefall,mygrandfather'sfamilynotonlymilkedthecowbutalsomowedandstackedthehay.
5.用更為精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語,例如下面這句話:
Mygrandfatherdidn'thavetimetostandarounddoingnothingwithhisschoolfriends.Standarounddoingnothing其實可以用一個動詞來表達(dá),即loiter:Mygrandfatherdidn'thavetimetoloiterwithhisschoolfriends.
6.有時兩句話的信息經(jīng)過組合完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達(dá),例如:
Profitsfromthefarmwerenotlarge.Sometimestheyweretoosmalltomeettheexpensesofrunningafarm.Theywerenotsufficienttopayforauniversitydegree.
兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡潔的句子:Profitsfromthefarmweresometimestoosmalltomeetoperationalexpenses,letalonepayforauniversitydegree.
英語寫作重要句子
一、常用于開頭的句式
1.Withtherapidlygrowingpopularityof…,thequalityofourliveshasbeenconsiderablychanged.
例句:WiththerapidlygrowingpopularityofcomputersinChina,thequalityofourliveshasbeenconsiderablychanged.
2.Recently,sth./theproblemof…h(huán)asbeenbroughttopopularattention/hasbecomethefocusofpublicconcern.
例句:Recently,theproblemofunemploymenthasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitontheagendaasthefirstmatter.
3.Withthedevelopmentof…,moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethat…
例句:Withthedevelopmentofhigheducation,moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethatknowledgeplaysaroleofextremeimportanceinmodernsociety.
http://emrowgh.com hepastfewyears,therehasbeenaboom/sharpgrowth/declinein…
例句:Inthepastfewyears,therehasbeenadeclineinthenumberofspecies.
5.Itisatraditionalpracticeto…inoursociety.
例句:Itisatraditionalpracticeforyoungpeopletobefinanciallydependentontheirparentsforanythinglikemarriageandhousing.
http://emrowgh.com …例句:Everyonewouldagreethat,althoughourageentirelyovershadowsallpreviousagesinmeansofobtainingknowledge,readingstilltakesitsleadingroleinallsenses.
8.Tosb’smind/insb’seyes, http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Intheeyesofthepublic,officialcorruptionmeanstakingbribes.Butsuchcorruptioncomesinmanydifferentforms.
9.Nowitiswidelybelievedthat…
例句:Nowitiswidelybelievedthatexaminationsarethebestpossiblemeasurefortheselectionofthequalified.
http://emrowgh.com …h(huán)asmadeanenormous/essentialdifferenceto…Butisdoesnotmeanthat…
例句:Thebirthofthecomputerhasmadeanessentialdifferencetothehumanprogress.Butitdoesnotmeanthatthiswonderdosenothreattooursociety.
11.Sth.haschangedthewayoursocietydevelops,butitsbrightsideshouldnotkeepusfromfollowingcloselyitsdarkside.
例句:Thegeneticengineeringhaschangedthewayoursocietydevelops,butitsbrightsideshouldnotkeepusfromfollowingcloselyitsdarkside.
12.Whatwouldoursocietybelikeiftherewereno…?
例句:Whatwouldoursocietybelikeiftherewerenopublicmorals?
13.Shouldweputsth.abovesth.else?/Shouldweattachasmuchweighttosth.asto.sth.else?
例句:Shouldweputintellectualdevelopmentabovemoraleducation?
14.Sth.isjustthesameas…/iscomparedto…/islike…
例句:Lifeinthemiddleofmarriageifoftencomparedtowirewalking,forintheearlyyearsspousesattracteachotherandinlateyearstheyneedeachother.
15.Inourlife,thereoftenappearssuchanoccasionwhen…/onwhich…
例句:Inourdailylife,thereoftenappearssuchanoccasionwhenwedrinksuccetoourworkinonefieldbut,atthesametime,begintodogreatdamagetootherfields.
16.Oneofthegreatmenonesaidthat…/Thereisanoldsayingthat…
例句:AgiftedAmericanpsychologistoncesaidthatitisanillusiontobelieveintheSunday-schooltruth—morecomfort,morehappiness.
http://emrowgh.com …percentof…
例句:Accordingtoarecentsurveymadeinacertainuniversity,thereare43.8percentofmalestudentsand38.3percentoffemalestudentseitherfacingproblemswithnutritionorhavingtomiclassesbecauseofillneeachterm.
18.Nowadays,aheateddebate/discussionabout…isunderwayinChina.Somepeoplebelievethat…,whereasothersarguethat…
例句:Nowadays,aheateddebateaboutwhetheroneshouldstepforwardbravelyintheeventofcrimeisunderwayinChina.Somepeoplebelievethatoneshouldstepforwardbravelynomatterhowdangerousitis,whereasothersarguethatoneshould
puthisorherownsafetyaboveanythingelse.
19.Whenitcomesto…,mostpeoplecontendthat…,butotherpeopleconsiderthat…
例句:Whenitcomestofakecommodities,mostpeoplecontendthatpeopleshouldbattleagainstthefalsehoodofthefakes,butotherpeopleconsiderthatbuyingfakecommoditiesmeansnothingbut“unlucky”whichishardtoavoid.
20.Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesin…
例句:Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesinowningacar.
二、常用于結(jié)尾的句式
http://emrowgh.com …例句:Itishopedthatweshouldpaymoreattentiontotheproblemsofunemployment.
http://emrowgh.com …,will/canwe…
例句:Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
3.Aslongas…,wewillbeableto…/theproblemsisboundto…
例句:Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Inalongrun,thepracticeofbirthcontrolisbelievedtodoagreatbenefittothefutureofChina.
5.Inaword,thereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat…intimetocome.
例句:Inaword,thereiseverychancethatthiswisemoveineconomicconstructionwillacquireabroadersignificanceintimetocome.
7.Itishightimethat…
例句:Itishightimethattheissueweretobesolvedsoastopromotetheeconomicdevelopment.
8.Weshoulddoourbestineliminating…
例句:Weshoulddoourbestineliminatingairpollution.
10.Inorderto…,wemust…
例句:Inordertomakeourworldabetterplaceinwhichtolive,wemustlearntoliveinharmonywithallwildlifespecies.
13.Wecancometotheconclusionthat…
例句:Wecancometotheconclusionthatlivingoncampusisthebestwayoflearningindependence,andofunderstandingotherpeopleandsocietyatlarge.
15.Mysuggestionisthat…;otherwise…
例句:Mysuggestionisthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocheckpopulationgrowth;otherwise,thepotentialconsequencesareunimaginable.
18.Therefore,weshouldnotonly…but…aswell.
例句:Therefore,weshouldnotonlyrealizethatcompetitionandcooperation,liketwosidesofthecoin,havetogohandinhand,butfixmoreattentiononhowtomakefulluseofcooperationaswell.
20.Whoistosaythat…?
例句:Whoistosaythatourscientistsmaynotprovideabettertheory?
三、常用的過渡句式
2.Foronething…Foranother…Asathirdbenefit/disadvantage…
例句:Foronething,someexcellentstudentscantakefulladvantageoftheholidaytoawakentheirpersonalinterestssuchaspainting,sightseeingandsoon.Foranother,itcanprovidemorechancesforsomepoorstudentstohelpmaketwoendsmeetandtogetpreparedforthefuturebytakingpart-timejobs.Asathirdbenefit,forthosewhoarefarfromgoodatacertainsubject,thereisagoldenopportunityofcatchingupwithother.
http://emrowgh.com ’tcompete/becomparedwithsthelsein…,butsthstillenjoys/secures/possessesdistinct/substantialadvantageoversthelse.
例句:Itisobviousthatradiocannotcompetewithtelevisioninvisuality,butitstillpossessessubstantialadvantagesovertelevision.(Oneoftheseis…Another…Stillanother…)
http://emrowgh.com
that….Butwhattheyfailtoconsider/analyze/see/findoutisthat…
例句:Thoseinfavorofeuthanasia(安樂死)contendthatitspracticecanbenefitboththepatientandhisfamily.Butwhattheyfailtoconsideristhateuthanasiamaybetakenadvantageofforsomeevilorhiddenpurposes.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Quiteafewfactorshaveledmetoformthehabitofreading
四、描述漫畫的句式
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Thecartoonbriefsthehistoryofcommercialfishinginthe20thcentury.
http://emrowgh.com hepicture,…
例句:Inthepicture,anAmericangirllookssopleasedintherichlydecoratedChinesenationalcostumes.
3.Lookingatthepicture,…
例句:Lookingatthepicture,manypeoplecannothelplaughing.…
4.…。Thisiswhatthepictureindicates.
例句:ItisnotunusualforChinesechildrentogetmoneyfromtheirparents,grandparentsorrelativesduringtheSpringFestival.…Thisiswhatthepictureindicates.
5.Thetwopictureshereillustrate…
例句:Thetwopictureshereillustratehowaflowerinagreenhouseisdestroyedwhenexposedtoastorm.
http://emrowgh.com hefirstpicture,….Whileinthesecondone,…
例句:Inthefirstpicture,alonelysmallboat,inspiteofthegoodcatch,doesnotdisturbthefishesthatareswimmingleisurely.Whileinthesecondone,theseaisover-crowdedwithfishingboats,andalonelyfish,desperatelytryingtoescape,findsnoplacetohide.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,thecarbreaksstopsonthewayandcannotmoveanyfurther.
8.Itismostlikelythatbydrawingthepictures,theartistintends…
例句:Itismostlikelythatbydrawingthepictures,theartistintendsnotonlytotellusthestoryoffishbutalsotosetusthinkingmoreaboutnature.
五、圖表作文的句式
http://emrowgh.com …例句:Accordingtothefiguresshowninthetable,wecanseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakingplaceinpeople’sdietovertheperiodfrom1988to1998.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:ThechartrevealsthatthenumberofroadaccidentsisspiralingupwardeveryyearasmoreandmorehighwaysareconstructedalloverChina.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Aswecanseeinthediagramreleasedbythegovernment,therapidgrowthofpopulationhasresultedintheextinctionofmanywildlifespecies.
http://emrowgh.com
increase/rise/decline/reduction/fall/dropin…comparedwiththoseoflastyear/10yearsago/lastcentury…
例句:Thegraphshowsamarkeddeclineinthenumberofwildlifespeciescomparedwiththatoflastcentury.
9.Noincreaseisshownin…;thencameasharpincreaseof…
例句:Noincreaseisshownin1988;thencameasharpincreaseof8million.
http://emrowgh.com
例句:Theproductionofcottonistwiceasmuchasthatofwheat.
http://emrowgh.com …
例句:Thetablerepresentsthedevelopmentandchangesinagriculturestructureinthepast30years.
12.Bycomparisonwith…,itdropped/fell/decreasedfrom…to…/by…例句:Bycomparisonwith1990,itdroppedby15percent.
http://emrowgh.com