2016年托福寫作高分范文點(diǎn)評

　　寫作是托�？荚嚨闹匾�部分，下面百分網(wǎng)小編為大家搜索整理了關(guān)于2016年托福寫作高分范文點(diǎn)評，歡迎參考學(xué)習(xí)，希望對大家有所幫助!想了解更多相關(guān)信息請持續(xù)關(guān)注我們應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生考試網(wǎng)!

　　(一)

　　It is as important for older people to study or learn new things as it is for younger people.

　　解析：

　　這個(gè)題目是一個(gè)A=B的題目，筆者建議同意，因?yàn)橹恍璺謩e說出A和B的各一個(gè)好處，就可以成功論證具體思路如下：

　　全文思路梳理：

　　理由一：對老年人重要：因?yàn)榭梢藻憻捤季S，預(yù)防記憶力反應(yīng)力的退化，或者老年癡呆癥。(On the one hand, there is no denying that learning new things plays an important role in practicing the thinking of the old and is beneficial for their health. As we all know, it’s easier for old people to suffer from the lapse of memory and Alzheimer disease, and mental labor can contribute to preventing these illness.(+具體事例))

　　理由二：對年輕人重要：學(xué)習(xí)新的技能可以讓年輕人在學(xué)習(xí)工作中表現(xiàn)優(yōu)異，在激烈的競爭中脫穎而出。(On the other hand, it’s also indisputable that acquiring new knowledge is crucial for the young due to the fierce competition today. In order to outcompete others, youngsters have to develop more skills through learning new things.(+具體事例))

　　(二)

　　(A/D) People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are verydifferent from what they do at work. 【2014.7.6 ML】

　　主論點(diǎn)：同意

　　思路：

　　1. 讓人全面發(fā)展：well-rounded: mentally and physically active

　　2. 擴(kuò)大社交圈people from all walks of life / like-minded peers

　　3. 放松：relax=unwind = loosen up by doing something/ take their mind off their busy work/refreshed and recharged

　　類似題目：

　　1. Workers would be much happier if they aredoing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.(130412NA)

　　2. It is more likely for people with moreskills to succeed.

　　必背話題語料：

　　1. 讓人全面發(fā)展：well-rounded:

　　Developinghobbies or physical activities different from daily work can make peoplebetter-rounded. In other words, those people who are used to a sedentary lifestylewill become mentally and physically active.

　　2. 認(rèn)識各行各業(yè)具有相同興趣的人make acquaintance with like-minded peersfrom all walks of life.

　　People withhobbies or physical activities different from their jobs will have the chanceto make acquaintance with like-minded peers from all walks of life.

　　3. 更好的放松方式a better outlet of loosening up (relax=unwind = loosen up by doing something/ take their mind off their busy work/refreshed and recharged)

　　Pursuing a hobbywill be a better outlet of loosening up for people with tight and boring workschedule.

　　4、stress relief n. 壓力的消除，解壓

　　*Hobbies canconnect you with others, which can bring stress relief and social support. 興趣能讓你和別人聯(lián)絡(luò)，這就能讓壓力消除，并且有助于人際關(guān)系。

　　5、be overwhelmed by sth. 壓力山大，不知所措

　　*Those who feeloverwhelmed by work can benefit from hobbies because they provide an outlet forstress.那些被工作壓得喘不過氣來的人能從愛好中受益良多因?yàn)閻酆媚芴峁┮环N解壓的方式。

　　6、besusceptible to sth. 易患…;易受…影響

　　*People with asedentary lifestyle are more susceptible to obesity and heart diseases. 久坐生活習(xí)慣的人更可能罹患肥胖癥和心臟病。

　　7、a remedyfor sth. …的解決辦法

　　*A hobby canserve as a remedy for stress and restore your vitality and whenever you arestressed out. 興趣愛好可以作為壓力的解決辦法，在你壓力山大的時(shí)候恢復(fù)精力。

　　8、sharea lot/much/something in common 有共通之處

　　*When two peopleshare something in common, they are more likely to get along. 如果兩個(gè)人有共同點(diǎn)，那么就比較容易相處。

　　9、chaseaway 趕走;驅(qū)逐

　　*While you pursuea hobby, you may discover that you have a talent for something unusual, whichcan chase away any work-related stress. 在你培養(yǎng)一個(gè)愛好的時(shí)候，你可能會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你對于某個(gè)特別的事物有天賦，這就能驅(qū)散你工作的壓力。

【托福寫作高分點(diǎn)評】相關(guān)文章：

托福獨(dú)立寫作高分范文精選05-23

2016托福寫作高分技巧03-15

托福寫作高分技巧解析12-04

2017托福寫作經(jīng)典高分范文11-20

托福寫作如何拿高分12-08

托福寫作高分句型整理06-19

2015年托福寫作高分技巧03-17

托福寫作必備高分句型匯總03-15

2016年托福寫作高分句型03-15