2016年12月英語四六級寫作優(yōu)秀范文

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　　四六級作文題目：

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should University Campuses Be Used as Public Parking Lots? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　1. 目前一些大學開放校園作為公共停車場

　　2. 有人認為這樣可以資源共享，有人認為這樣會擾亂教學秩序

　　3. 我認為……

　　范文一

　　Should University Campuses Be Used as Public Parking Lots?

　　In pace with the rapid growth of the economy, the amount of private cars is increasingly rising. Meanwhile, the problems of parking are also becoming more and more severe. Recently, some universities have opened their campuses as public parking lots, which has caused a heated discussion among people.

　　Should university campuses be used as public parking lots? Different people hold different ideas. Some argue that using university campuses as public parking lots is beneficial to improving the current parking condition by sharing resources. Yet 【yet改成Meanwhile】 others maintain that too many cars parked into the campus will break the peace of the academic environment.

　　As for me, I disagree with using university campuses as public parking lots. On the one hand, private cars release too much exhaust gas that exerts negative effects on the air condition and do harm to students’health. On the other hand, with too many vehicles, it is more difficult for campuses to stay 【stay改為keep】 well-ordered and safe. For instance, private cars pose a potential threat to pedestrians and cyclists on campus if drivers are careless. Therefore, to avoid trouble and danger, I strongly hold that university campuses should not be used as public parking lots.

　　點評：文章結構合理，只有個別現(xiàn)銜接和搭配不夠妥當，用詞句型都比較準確。

　　范文二

　　Viewpoints on dialectal programme

　　To cater for different people’s taste, the television producers wrack their brains to bring forth new ideas in order to attract more and more people. Nowadays, there are some dialectal programme come on the scene .

　　As the most of new things appearing, it usually accompanied with the controversy. Some people are in favor of dialectal TV programme while others hold opposite opinions. As far as i'm concerned, I think it is a fabulous programme. First of all, extinction of language and culture is one of the major challenges we face today. We've been forced to speak Mandan 【應該是mandarin】 since the kindergarten. As a result, we can't speak the local dialect. It's a good way to help children and adults to pick up it again. Dialect, as the gem of Chinese culture, should be well-reserved and inherit 【過去分詞不要忘哦】 to the next generation. What’s more, a lot of people work at 【at改為in更合適】 another city, which 【be動詞is不能忘】 far away from his hometown, 【添加一個連接詞and】 work very hard. They must be moved and happy to hear the friendly local dialect, which can make them more ambitious to realize their dream of becoming richer. Last but not least, it makes the TV programme more various. When we 【缺一個are】 bored with the gossip of stars, TV series and news, the dialectal TV programme can relax our mind and reduce stress.

　　All in all, dialectal TV programme is such 【這里加一個a】 brilliant idea that we should reserve it and make it better.

　　點評：觀點明確，句型不錯哦。但是要細心，很多語法錯誤是可以通讀一遍檢查出來的哦。

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