名師淺談:新托福寫作用詞地道之名詞化

　　名師淺談:新托福寫作用詞地道之名詞化

　　A 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的賓語(yǔ)部分

　　原句：I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

　　名詞化：I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

　　B 結(jié)合被動(dòng)形式

　　原句：If people decide without enough persuasive information，...

　　名詞化：If a decision is made without enough persuasive information，...

　　C 取代諸如從句中“the fact that”的用法

　　原句：The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

　　名詞化：My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

　　更好的名詞化：a. When I denied his accusations， I impressed the jury.

　　b. In denying his accusations， I impressed the jury.

　　D 名詞化部分用在there is/are的.后面

　　原句：We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

　　名詞化：There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

　　原句：The floods considerably eroded the land.

　　名詞化：There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

　　然而，有些時(shí)候，在我們的思維方式中認(rèn)為理所應(yīng)當(dāng)使用“名詞化”時(shí)，老外認(rèn)為是沒(méi)有必要的。比如：

　　A 名詞化部分跟在動(dòng)詞后面

　　原句(名詞化“冗余”)：The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

　　改后：The police investigated the matter.

　　B 名詞化部分作為主語(yǔ)

　　原句：Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

　　改后：We discussed a tax cut.

　　C 連續(xù)進(jìn)行名詞化

　　原句：a. First， she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

　　b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

　　改后：First， she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

　　D 連接部分名詞化

　　原句：Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

　　改后：They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

　　原句：The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

　　改后：Even though the motor housing was unstable， the research staff completed the field trials.

　　以上這些情況是我們中國(guó)學(xué)生很常見的名詞化缺失或名詞化濫用的例子。對(duì)于新托福寫作來(lái)說(shuō)，在保證基本的語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)法不出錯(cuò)的基礎(chǔ)上，如果能更多地正確使用名詞化，文章不但更地道，也更易取得高分。當(dāng)然，熟練掌握名詞化不是一蹴而就的事情，平時(shí)需要多積累，多運(yùn)用。

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