高中英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)回信的技巧
A letter to American friend Tom 給美國(guó)朋友Tom的回信
給美國(guó)朋友Tom的回信
假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回郵件：
1. 未及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因；
2. 你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）。
注意： 1. 字?jǐn)?shù)：120~150；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【試題點(diǎn)評(píng)】
今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)題目延續(xù)山東省一貫的提綱作文命題習(xí)慣，時(shí)隔一年之后重新回到“書(shū)信題”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信為外衣，以活動(dòng)安排為主體段”的提綱作文，相當(dāng)于10年山東卷（道歉信）和07年四川卷（假期安排）和合體。這種作文是我們平時(shí)經(jīng)常練習(xí)的，因此套路很完善、套話(huà)很豐富。此外，本文中需要同學(xué)們翻譯的.難句不多，因此，只要在備考過(guò)程中有意識(shí)地了解過(guò)高考英語(yǔ)作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、加分句型和過(guò)渡詞，并加以針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練，這道題目應(yīng)該不難寫(xiě)。
【經(jīng)典套路】
第一段：?jiǎn)柡?寫(xiě)信背景+寫(xiě)信目的
第二段：“道歉”部分（相當(dāng)于“寫(xiě)信背景”）
第三段：“假期安排”部分
第四段：補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明+客套話(huà)
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (問(wèn)候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.（寫(xiě)信背景） I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.（寫(xiě)信目的）
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.（第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路）
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.（主題句） First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.（拓展句1） Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.（拓展句2） Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.（拓展句3）
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（以合理的客套話(huà)結(jié)尾）
Yours,
Li Hua
親愛(ài)的湯姆，
How are you doing? (問(wèn)候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.（寫(xiě)信背景） I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.（寫(xiě)信目的）
你怎么樣？（問(wèn)候）你在的最后一封中問(wèn)我我的暑假計(jì)劃。（寫(xiě)信背景）我很抱歉，我沒(méi)有立即回復(fù)。（寫(xiě)信目的）
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.（第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路）
我多么希望我能閱讀并回復(fù)你的郵件，當(dāng)我收到它的時(shí)候。然而，我正忙著準(zhǔn)備在那次考試，這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很重要。結(jié)果，我只好完全專(zhuān)注于我的學(xué)習(xí)。我相信，如果你是我，你會(huì)做出同樣的選擇。（第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路）
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.（主題句） First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.（拓展句1） Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.（拓展句2） Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.（拓展句3）
順便說(shuō)一下，我的暑假很忙。（主題句）首先，我會(huì)做一份兼職的工作，這樣我的人際交往能力會(huì)得到提高。（拓展句1）此外，我會(huì)做個(gè)短途旅行去北京新東方學(xué)校參加暑期課程。（拓展句2）最后但并非最不重要的，也許我會(huì)作為一個(gè)志愿者參加工作，在學(xué)校當(dāng)助教。（拓展句3）
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（以合理的客套話(huà)結(jié)尾）
這是我的暑假計(jì)劃。你的是什么？我期待著你的早日答復(fù)。（以合理的客套話(huà)結(jié)尾）
美好的祝愿，
李華
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