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大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文分析
下面的兩篇英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文，一篇關(guān)于早起，一篇關(guān)于晨練，都是跟早上有關(guān)的。后面附有作文分析，歡迎閱讀!
early rising早起
ea rly rising is beneficial to us in many ways .
first , it helps us to keep fit . we all need f resh air , but air is never so f resh as ea rly in the morning . besides , we can do morning exercises in the open air to improve our health .
secondly , early rising helps us in our studies . we learn more quickly in the morning , and find it easier to commit to memory what we learn .
thirdly , early rising enables us to plan the work of the day . we can’t work well without a plan . ju st as the plan for the year s hould be made in spring , so the plan for the day should be made in the morning .
four thly , early rising gives us enough time to get r eady for a day’s work , such as checking the time- table , collecting the things needed for school .
late riser s may find it difficult to cultivate the habit of ea rly rising , even though they know the impor tance of early rising . t hey should r eally try their effor ts to do so , and t ry to unde rstand the saying“ea rly to bed , ea rly to rise makes a man healthy , wealthy and wise .”
結(jié)構(gòu)分析：
· thematic sentence
* ea rly rising — beneficial in many ways
· advant ages of early rising
* fr es h morning air
* fres h memory
* plan for the day in the mor ning
* enough time for preparing a day’s work
· late rise rs should cultivate this habitbe
內(nèi)容分析：
這是一篇簡(jiǎn)單的議論文, 作者論述了早起的好處并對(duì)遲起者提出忠告。全文句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單, 但讀來(lái)很流暢。
萬(wàn)能句型：
keep fit 保持健康
commit to memory what we learn 記住學(xué)過(guò)的`東西
“ ear ly to bed , ea rly to rise makes a man healthy , wealthy
and wise .”“ 早睡早起使人健康、富有和聰明”。
morning exercises晨練
morning came . the bell rang . i got out of the warm cotton- padded quilt , quickly dressed myself , ran onto the playground , and played on the pa rallel bars .
a few moments la ter , more people came . they exercised themselves in various way s . some ran around the track . some played on the horizontal ba r . still some played bas ketball , trying to shoot baskets . a group of girls were walking on the balance beam by turn . a couple of st rongly-built boys made graceful movements on the flying rings . ove r the re, several old men and women did s hadow-boxing .
at exactly 6∶30 , music came for people to do exercises to radio music . for ten minutes all the people on the playground we re seen bending down and st raightening up , turning left and right . it’s really a beautiful sight to look at !
結(jié)構(gòu)分析：
· from bed to the playground
· people exercise themselves in various ways
·doing morning exe rcises to r adio mu sic
內(nèi)容分析：
本文既是一篇記敘文又是一篇描寫(xiě)文。文中記敘了某一天 的晨練情景, 因此均用過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě); 同時(shí)描寫(xiě)了晨練時(shí)的種種健身活動(dòng), 真實(shí)而生動(dòng), 讀來(lái)可有身在其中之感。
萬(wàn)能句型：
cotton-padded quilt 棉被
pa rallel bar s 雙杠
run around the t rack 繞著跑道跑步
horizontal bar 單杠
s hoot baskets 投籃
balance beam 平衡木
by turn 輪流
flying rings 吊環(huán)
s hadow-boxing 太極拳
bending down and st raightening up 彎腰運(yùn)動(dòng)
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