如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句文章必定很單調(diào)乏味，增強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力的有效方法一避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的動(dòng)詞，四防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)，英語(yǔ)專四寫(xiě)作怎樣使句子多樣化，如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。
怎樣使句子多樣化
怎樣使句子多樣化
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外，詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理，也起著決定性作用。
句子可長(zhǎng)可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句，讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之，作者可根據(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別：
(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句(1)+2)
(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2))
(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見(jiàn)；如果加上其他三種互相交替，句子不是更多樣化嗎？最后，看看這兩個(gè)句子要如何多樣化呢？
(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.
(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.
(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.
(c)Theyoungpilot'sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.
(d)Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.
(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.
(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.
(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.
(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.在上述12個(gè)句子中，(a)-(g)是簡(jiǎn)單句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？
增強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力的有效方法一、避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。
1、把句中的表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)。例如：
Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.
Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語(yǔ))
Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ))
2、將作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。例如：
1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.
Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.
2)Weak:Oneworker'splanistheeliminationoftardiness.
Revision:Oneworker'splaneliminatestardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”開(kāi)頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫(xiě)句的主語(yǔ)。例如：1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.
Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.
2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.
Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.
二、多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞，保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。例如：
1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.
Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.
2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.
Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.
三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。例如：
1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.
Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.
2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.
Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.
四、防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)。例如：
1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.
2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.
3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.
Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.
五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。例如：
1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.
Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.
2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfallImproved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.IELTS作文必背詞匯和句型總結(jié)IELTS作文詞匯和句型總結(jié)
不同意
Iwouldcertainlyopposechangingthesystem[+ingformofverb]
She'sopposedtoreligiouseducationinschools.--beopposedtosthtodisagree-withaprincipleorplan:---
Areyoufororagainstmyproposal
Heobjectstothelabel'magician'whichheisoftengiven.
Herobjectionto/againsttheplanisbasedonincorrectfacts
同意
Havetheyassentedto(=agreedto)thetermsofthecontract?－－『Formal』
Sheadvocatestakingamorelong-termview.[+ingformofverb]
Headvocatesthereturnofcapitalpunishment.
Ithinkyouwerequitejustifiedincomplaining『havingagoodreasonforsomething』Igenerallyfavourtravellingbynight,whentheroadsarequiet.
ButthefederalTrainingMinisterdisputescrisiscallsfromemployers,問(wèn)題出現(xiàn)
OneofthedisquietingfactsstemmingfromthisisthatplasticbagscanbecomeserialkillersThishasresultedinabanonplasticbagsbeingimposedthereearlyin2002.
anincreasinglycrowdedcurriculum,mathsisbeingsidelined.
townshiphospitalsarerunningatalossorareonthevergeofcollapse.
Theworld'stropicalforestscontinuetodisappearwithdishearteningspeed
fromSeptemberthroughtoDecemberairbornepollenfromoliveblossomsiscontributingtoasthmaandhayfeverproblems
Butrecentlyanewtrendhasbeenevident-onepersonlivinginahouse
theriseandriseofthesinglepersonhousehold.問(wèn)題原因
ThiscouldbeduetothefactthatHDPEbagscannotbeputoutforcollectionwithotherhouseholdrecyclables
Theproblemarisespartlybecausecharitieshaveoutpostsinareasofconflict:
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seriouslong-termconsequenceshaveresultedfromtheuncontrolleduseofresources,particularlythecuttingof
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解決問(wèn)題
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Giventhecostsandinconvenienceassociatedwithrecycling,andthefactthatreuseonlydelaystheplasticenteringthe
environment,themostsensibleoptionistocutdownonthenumberofplasticbagsthatyouuse,orstopusingthemaltogether.
Therearearangeofalternativestoplasticbags
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Ratherthanfightthroughthecourtsparkbypark,reservebyreserve,theGovernmenthasoptedtonegotiatewiththem.
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powerarebecomingmoreviableoptions,particularlyinsmaller,moreremotecommunties.
英語(yǔ)專四寫(xiě)作怎樣使句子多樣化
英語(yǔ)專四寫(xiě)作怎樣使句子多樣化
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外，詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理，也起著決定性作用。句子可長(zhǎng)可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句，讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。
最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，以及節(jié)縮成分�？傊髡呖筛鶕�(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別：
(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句(1)+2)
(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2))
(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副詞從句+主句)
(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.
(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.
(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.
(c)Theyoungpilot'sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.
(d)Extremeuneasineseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.
(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.
(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.
(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.
(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.
(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.
在上述12個(gè)句子中，(a)-(g)是簡(jiǎn)單句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？
增強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力的有效方法
一、避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。
1、把句中的表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)。例如：
Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegraisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.
Revision:Thebrowngraandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語(yǔ))
Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ))
2、將作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。例如：
1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.
Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.
2)Weak:Oneworker’splanistheeliminationoftardiness.
Revision:Oneworker’splaneliminatestardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”開(kāi)頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫(xiě)句的主語(yǔ)。例如：
1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.
Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.
2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.
Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.
二、多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞，保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。
例如：
1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.
Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.
2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.
Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.
三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
例如：
1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.
Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.
2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.
Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.
四、防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)。
例如：
1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.
2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.
3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldreindifferentstores.
Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedreindifferentstores.
五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。
例如：
1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.
Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.
2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.
英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技巧-怎樣使句子多樣化
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外，詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理，也起著決定性作用。
句子可長(zhǎng)可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句，讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之，作者可根據(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別：
(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句(1)+2)
(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2))
(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見(jiàn)；如果加上其他三種互相交替，句子不是更多樣化嗎？最后，看看這兩個(gè)句子要如何多樣化呢？
(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.
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(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.
(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.
(c)Theyoungpilot'sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.
(d)Extremeuneasineseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.
(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.在上述12個(gè)句子中，(a)-(g)是簡(jiǎn)單句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？
增強(qiáng)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句表現(xiàn)力的有效方法
一、避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。
1、把句中的表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)。例如：
Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegraisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.
Revision:Thebrowngraandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語(yǔ))Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ))
2、將作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。例如：
1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.
Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.
2)Weak:Oneworker'splanistheeliminationoftardiness.
Revision:Oneworker'splaneliminatestardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”開(kāi)頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫(xiě)句的主語(yǔ)。例如：
1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.
Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.
2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.
Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.
二、多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞，保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。例如：
1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.
Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.
2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.
Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.
三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。例如：
1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.
Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.
2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.
Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.
四、防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)。例如：
1、Wordy:Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
Improved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.
2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.
3、Redundant:Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
4、Redundant:MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldreindifferentstores.Improved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedreindifferentstores.
五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。例如：
1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.
Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.
2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.
Improved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.